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Not A Perfect Prince (16)
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It was on the evening when the bus was heading to Pattaya Beach. It was the last day of the tour. The four were sitting together, talking about the beautiful sunset of that place.
“Cynthia.. I’ll complete my promise today, you know it, right?” asked Jeffrey to Cynthia.
“Yes I knew it. Our friendship promise, right?” asked Cynthia.
“Umm…. Hum… yeah…” Jeffrey smiled. Cynthia took a glimpse at the necklace she was wearing. The seashell Jeffrey gave her. But she knew that Jeffrey only knew her as a friend. Not more. She sighed.
Finally the bus stopped. People started to walk out of the bus and changed their clothes.
“Oh My God.. this is damn cool…” Cynthia felt the sand under her bare feet. Their last day of vacation took place at Pattaya Beach. It’s 5 o’clock and the sun was near its hiding time.
“So.. How’s it?” Jeffrey smiled.
“Absolutely beautiful…” Cynthia nodded. “But… it’s so normal… like..”
“Follow me..” Jeffrey grabbed her hand quickly.
“Where will we go?” asked Cynthia. They were heading to a quite spot of the beach.
“Wait. Let’s climb this.. Here! Take my hand..” Jeffrey took Cynthia to a cliff. A really nice cliff with nice views. They sat on a large stone.
“Oh My God! The sun is setting! Sunset! Sunset!” Cynthia shouted. Jeffrey looked at her. He couldn’t blink. While she didn’t realize.
Finally the sun began to set. A view to die for. A miracle to Cynthia.
“Cynthia….”
“Hmmm?”
“I… want to say something..”
“What…?”
“This sunset is beautiful, right?”
“Absolutely!”
“But you are more beautiful. Million times more beautiful…. You are so precious..”
“Thanks…”
“Cynthia….”
“Yea?”
“I love you.”
Cynthia looked at Jeffrey surprisedly. She whispered,
“How..come?”
“I don’t know.. I don’t need any reason to love you. You are just… Too awesome to be true..” Jeffrey held Cnthia’s hand. She began to cry happy tears.
“Really? I thought we are just friends..”
“No.. you are more than that. You are even more than love. You are my FIRST LOVE…”
They hugged and the sun set. Cynthia captured it with her camera.
“I love you, too..” Cynthia blushed. “And by the way, this is for you..”
Jeffrey took the black necklace Cynthia gave to him.
“Love forever?”
“And ever after..”
“Take this.. I don’t care..” Ryan threw the Teddy bear to Felicity.
“Why should I take this?” She made an angry face.
“Because it’s a doll!” said Ryan.
“Why me? Just give it to Cynthia or someone! Not me.. I hate dolls!” Felice shouted.
“Ok if you hate dolls. It’s just.. I did know you well 8 years ago. But now.. I don’t know you very well…” Ryan sat in front of Felice. “It’s just… maybe… I’m sorta love you…”
“Huh? Hahaha… Don’t joke..” Felice laughed. But her heart ran so fast.
“Take a closer look at the bear. There’s something.” Said Ryan. Pointing at the necklace.
“But…”
“Don’t ask.. I don’t even know..”
“Actually… I’m sorta love you, too….” Felice blushed.
And I guess you know what happened next…
TO BE CONTINUED
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| On August 17th 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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wow, Ryan is such a loser, but in a good way! Wait, does that make sense? No? It's such a cute story! Excellent job! GOD BLESS YOU ALL!!! |
| On August 14th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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awwwww soo cute!!! Jeffery is so sweet, and ryan is funny he does have a lot of catching up to do though... dolls. =] |
| On July 20th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Gosh cute cute |
| On July 20th 2008 laurgarud1 Said : | |
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that's so cool! they all found someone they love!! |
| On July 19th 2008 angel281295 Said : | |
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hahahaha...at last, felice admitted that she likes him...ah...so wonderful
...kmp... |
| On July 18th 2008 C4444 Said : | |
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Alright !!!!!!!!! YEA YEA about time...... |
| On July 18th 2008 sasawitto Said : | |
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AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
funny, lol.. ^^ |
| On July 18th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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FINALLY! took them the whole time just to go to the beach and confess their love. |


