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Super-Girl (3) changing tittle to "Limited."

Science Created on 5-20-08 Views(73) Story Rating G

"Ting-tong" Sara clicked the bell.

"Yes?" a woman appear.

"Victoria Lee's house?" ask Sara.

"Yes, come in. I'm Mrs. Lee. she open the door. It is a big and luxurious house.

"Limited?" A 15 years old girl appear from her room.

Limited is Sara's "detective name". so people won't know that she's Sara Hamston. 

"Yes, Vic? What's wrong with your friend?" Sara smile. "By the way, this is my assistant, just call her OH."

OH is Mariah's detective name. OH refers to Only Human.

"Thanks for coming, let's take a sit." Vic take them to the dining room.

"Shareen is my best friend. Shareen is very discipline and perfectionist. I bet she won't be that clumsy to get kidnapped..

We usually go home together from school. But 2 days ago, we didn't. he said she want to buy some groceries. But she hasn't turned home yet till today." Shareen cries.

"Don't worry, I'll find her. I promise." Sara get up from the chair.

"Really? Promise me?" Say Vic.

"Yes. I promise. Give me just 3 days to solve this."  Say Sara.  MAriah type some information at her Laptop computer.

Google : Shareen Adam Thusdky : Search

Shareen Adam Thudsky... winner of..

Shareen tHudsky.. the best performer..

Shareen Thudsky... young scientist of the month.

....

"Wow! There must be more than a hundred contest she has won!" say Mariah.

"Yes, OH. She's so smart." Vic take a photo. "This is her."

"I'm sensing something's not right." Sara whispered to Mariah.

"Me too." Mariah closed her LAptop.

 

They then go to Shareen's house.

"Excuse me.. My name's Limited, FBI." Sara shows her badge.

"We have heard about you from Vic Lee. I'm Mrs. Thudsky, Shareen's mother."

"Thank you. Can we look around this house?' say Sara.

"Just don't mess anything." say Mrs. Thudsky.

Sara and Mariah enter Shareen's bed room.

"hmm...it's so neat..." Sara walk around the room.

"OUCH! Gruakkk..." something fall down up from the dresser.

"Huh?" Mariah take that thing.

"COLOUR's first album?" Sara take it. COLOUR is a famous rock band.

"That nicey-dovey girl?" Mariah ask.

"And some rock posters too." Sara looks at them.

"Oh my...oh my.." say Mariah.

"I think I know where is she." Sara looks at Mariah and smile.

 

TO BE CONTINUED 

 

 

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On May 30th 2008 chayeah22 Said :
chayeah22 I like this story! KMP!
On May 24th 2008 sasawitto Said :
sasawitto yeah! go limited!
On May 20th 2008 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 I'm liking this story so far! Wonder where the girl is? Kmp! Although, you could work on your fluency a bit more. But it's still awesome!
On May 20th 2008 C4444 Said :
C4444 Awesome sounds good.... kmp