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Super-Girl! (2)
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It began from and accident...
Sara was in her way home from school. She was on the car. Her driver drove the car. In their way, a sport car suddenly appeared with extra-fast speed. And..
'CRASHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!" It crushed Sara's car. The driver passed out but then he became healthy again. But not Sara..
She had a comma for the whole week. One day, she had a dream that a shimmering light came and crush her face. Then she got up.
Her dad, Mr. Steve Hamston and her mom, Mrs.Verina Anne Hamston was happy and shocked.
"Oh, my daughter!" said her Dad.
"Sara..." her Mom cried.
But there's something weird with Sara. Her power was getting bigger! She could push a heavy dresser easily. And when she punched a tree, It broke. At that time, Sara was 12. It was 5th November, 2 days after her 12th birthday. And her family, best friends and she finally realized. That she has a super-power. She entered A Detective Corporation as the youngest detective. People ask her to help them.
"KRINGGGG........" the alarm clock beside Sara's bed rings once again. She gets up and go to the bathroom.
"Yeah...To the left to the left..." she's singing. Her cellphone rings.
I MESSAGE
From: 08132266xxx
Message: Dear Super-Girl,
My name is Victoria Lee. Yesterday, my best friend was gone. And she hasn't come home yet. Her name is Shareen. And she's 15, same as me. PLease help me.. I know that you know what I feel coz we're about the same age. Thx
Vic, Honey Bee Street bla bla bla...
"New mission is coming!"
She replies,
"I'll come to your house, today, 5 pm"
Then she wear her uniforms and take her bag.
"Momm.... Another mission. So I'm gonna be late today." say Sara.
"OK. Make sure to go home at 9 o'clock, honey!" SAY mRS. Hamston.
Sara ate her breakfast and go to school.
"DING_DONG_DINGDONG" the breaktime bell rings.
"Sara... Have you do your HW?" say Mariah. She's Sara's bestfriend.
"All's good. And I have a new mission." say Sara. Mariah is her assistant. She can check a biodata of a person. Photos, fingerprints, and many more. She's in Detective Org. too as Sara's assistant.
"Can't wait!" say Mariah.
And it's the beggining of a new mission.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Comments
| On May 20th 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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YAAAY!!! Kid detectives! Great story, but you could still work on your fluency a bit. |
| On March 19th 2008 KimSmallwood Said : | |
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ha kmp |
| On March 18th 2008 lillex64 Said : | |
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ok good this one cleared up a lot of things! lol, love it! kmp |
| On March 18th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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cool kmp |
| On March 18th 2008 C4444 Said : | |
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Oh soo cute!!! KMP>>> :) |


