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Super-Girl! (1)

Fiction Created on 3-12-08 Views(115) Story Rating G

"HELPPPPPP!!!!!! HELLPPPPPP!!!!!!" a young girl shouted as a man tried to rape her. She was about 13 years old.

"oh, come on, honey.." that jerk tied her tightly.

Suddenly, there was a shadow of someone near that dark street.

"WHO"S THERE?!" that man shouted. But nobody answered. He tried to rape the girl again. When suddenly a girl's coming...

"BRUGH!" She punched him. She kicked his stomach and lungs. That man shouted.

"Please... release me... forgive me...."

The super-girl released him and he ran in worry.

"Thank you.." the 13 years old girl said.

The super-girl smiled.

"Get back to your family." She said, then she ran as fast as wind.

The 13 years old girl smiled. She didn't realize. That super-girl was wearing Junior High School uniform.

 

At a warm and peaceful house...

"Hah!" Sara jumped into her bed and lied there.

"It was a busy day... I went to school, did my projects and...

rescue a girl in my age..."

Yes. She was the super-girl.

Sara Michella Hamstons. A cheerful Junior High girl. She was intellegent, smart and kind.

But no one knew...

That she was a super-girl.

 

TO BE CONTINUED...

PS= Attention please.. What's better for me to write with, PAST-TENSE or just PRESENT TENSE. Please tell me..! Thx...

 

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On May 20th 2008 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 Nice! That's pretty cool! Although, you could try to make it a bit more fluent. But still awesome! Kmp!
On May 7th 2008 sasawitto Said :
sasawitto haha! nice story, waitin for the second episode please! :) lol
On March 14th 2008 lillex64 Said :
lillex64 present tense... Kmp
On March 12th 2008 KimSmallwood Said :
KimSmallwood eep. i love it! kmp
On March 12th 2008 avder Said :
avder Present tense! KMPP!!
On March 12th 2008 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 pretty good. Could have added more detail but still cute! KMP!
On March 12th 2008 C4444 Said :
C4444 Yep, present tense cute story I like this one good job!!!! KMP!!! :)
On March 12th 2008 geli01 Said :
geli01 present tense, can u slow it down a bit though? kmp!!!