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Boyfriend For Hire
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 Created on 4-3-08
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"What? CAn't you stand seeing me happy?" She sneered as he came up to us. "No way! You are going out with him!" He shouted his blue eyes filled with jealous. "You got a problem with that?" I asked as i passionately kissed her lips and an electric current shot through my body. "Wow." She muttered as she realized at how good i could kiss. "Whatever loser." He muttered puzzled and stunned by what had happened. "Ok thanks Chase!" She yelled as she walked off to her group of friends. "Dang dude! Already lip-locking and you just got together." Jake said as he came up to me, his shaggy brown hair falling past his pale,blue eyes.
Ok im running out of ideas! so they would be great! if u have any message me plz!
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Please Login to post comments| On June 10th 2008 kitkat298 Said : | |
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listen to the panda dude.That's good advice. |
| On April 4th 2008 XxStormyEyesxX Said : | |
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sry I'm fresh out of ideas, plz kmp tho!!! |
| On April 4th 2008 XxStormyEyesxX Said : | |
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sry I'm fresh out of ideas, plz kmp tho!!! |
| On April 3rd 2008 bittyb1 Said : | |
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ideas...well you can take this in a couple directions.. panda224 is right you could have her POV. that would be cool. either way it's a good story so far. KMP |
| On April 3rd 2008 CraziiChick208 Said : | |
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KMPP!! |
| On April 3rd 2008 Slackee Said : | |
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Awesome! I bet anything you come up with would be good but like Panda224 said you could have a chapter from her point of view. |
| On April 3rd 2008 Panda224 Said : | |
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Heh. I dunno about any ideas... But... You could always have a chapter from her point of view? Iunno. I'm not that great. > |
| On April 3rd 2008 ChaseCooper432 Said : | |
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R/R/C plz! |
