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Her Savior is Her Worst Enemy
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 Created on 3-20-08
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"Hey dork!" Nathan sneered as he slammed Christy into the lockers next to her. "Can you ever leave me alone?" Christy asked as pain shot through her body, although she was use to it. "Umm... let me think. No!" Nathan laughed as his group of friends joined in laughing like lunatics. "Whatever losers." Christy mumbled as she walked away from the group and went to her locker. "Why don't you ask her out?" John (Nathan's best friend) asked as Nathan steadily watched Christy her blonde, curly hair bouncing on her tan shoulders and her blue eyes that were filled with pain and sorrow but yet she acted like everything was just fine. "Because we could never be." Nathan said sadly as he picked up his blue backpack and slung it over his shoulder and walked away.
i hope you enjoyed this preview of my new story if you liked it plz comment and rate and even if you didnt like it comment on it and tell me how i can make it better thx ~Chase~
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Please Login to post comments| On March 27th 2008 ChristieSaya Said : | |
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like it. kmp |
| On March 21st 2008 k15smith Said : | |
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I like it you should make a next volume |
| On March 21st 2008 Ash94leigh Said : | |
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KMP please.
Every story you write turns into gold =] your hella talented |
| On March 20th 2008 xPunkxVanityx Said : | |
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I like ti so far, keep me psoted. |
| On March 20th 2008 Crazycutie7 Said : | |
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kmp plz |
| On March 20th 2008 hglnj94 Said : | |
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love it!!!!! kmp? |
| On March 20th 2008 dangg101 Said : | |
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kmp please i like it so far !~! |
| On March 20th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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I like it! |
| On March 20th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said : | |
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good start. i like it. please keep me posted! x] |
| On March 20th 2008 Aegle Said : | |
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i like it keep me posted please!!! |
| On March 20th 2008 feather1904 Said : | |
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kmp plz |
| On March 20th 2008 ChaseCooper432 Said : | |
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plz R/R/C |
