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| On July 3rd 2008 dramaqueenmak Said : | |
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your a really good writer! |
| On April 16th 2008 CharTheKnight Said : | |
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yeah... it is a bit long but it's only supposed to be a short story...meaning one page. :D |
| On April 14th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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Great job on this one. My only suggestion would be to break it up into smaller pieces... Otherwise, fantastic. |


