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Departed 3 (FINAL)

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Created on 11-29-07

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Lina sat beside me at the doctor’s office. She was squeezing my hand, and I knew that she was so afraid. Looking up at her big brother, who just was as straight-faced as a board. I brought her into my arms. To hug her and give her what comfort I have left. The doctor came. Then, thankfully, it disappeared. “Cancer is not what took you Adam. My son, God wanted to take you out of you misery. Mortals think that it is the disease that takes the people. But son, it is the Almighty Lord. He is your Savior from the misery.” I was almost not thankful for what He had doe. But then, I realized, that I had to be. I didn’t want to live in never-ending pain. The cancer would eat away at me (what it had left too eat at) and I would eternally be ready for death. “Here is you, from yesterday. You told your mother that you loved her, with all your heart, and everyone else. The next day, you, could not speak. My child, those were your famous last words.” He showed me lying in bed. My breathing was petrifying. I was afraid of my own breath? The thing that I so want now? “You were so crippled.” He said. I looked at myself. I was. I had no hair, from kemo. My eyes were open, but I knew that I couldn’t see anything. I was so…sad. “This is your last thought. Before God relived you.” Another picture of me came to the light. I was just lying there, so, crippled. But I could see my tears rushing down my cheek. I was so dull, and I felt as if I wanted to cry right then. “God…If you could ever help me… Please… Let me go… Let me die in peace…” I heard. I closed my eyes. The choppy breathe wasn’t able to be heard. Then, I was still I HAD asked God to save me. He DOES answer prayers! “Do you see now, why you had to move on, you were ready. Everything was ready. You had such a life.” He told me. I nodded and then let the tears come. I wailed. He embraced me, and I let all the shock roll off of my shoulders. I HAD a good life! This wasn’t the end! Just the beginning! “Adam Frederickson, my son. You are free.” He smiled. I saw another bright, golden light. I knew that I was free. So I did walk into the light. How cheesy does that sound? I was still crying when I walked. When I finally moved on. I was free.

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On July 1st 2008 CRISSY10012 Said :

	awww this was so great

On December 3rd 2007 kg108551 Said :

	:O

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