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 Created on 11-26-07
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More whenever you want it. Just message or comment and I will! :)
I am also the origanal creator of "Richard" one of the Weekly Top
It doesn’t feel as if had already happened. I feel as if I’m still waiting. I can see, but my eyes are closed. I can feel, but my arms are limp. I’m breathing, but my body is still. Had I lost my fight so easily? Had I given up so soon? I don’t even remember my pain. Had all this really happened? Or had my life been just a dream? “Adam! No!” Mom called. I speak, but no words come. She doesn’t answer. “Mom! Mom!” I had lost. But I shouldn’t be, dead. I’m only fourteen! I had barley lived my life! I want to hug my mom back. But, I can’t. My arms aren’t in my control. I’m dead. But if I am dead, why am I still here? Isn’t God or Jesus supposed to come and save me from my motionless body? Take me o Heaven? Soon, I start to cry. Though I don’t have any tears, I feel the pain in my stomach that I am. My mom is in hysterics. I’m in hysterics. What will happen to Renee? She was the first girl I kissed, and she’ll become so depressed. What about Peter? I don’t have a Will to give him all my cards and poker chips. And Lina, what was I going to do about my little sister Lina? She just can’t find out that her big brother…her hero…is dead. I don’t understand why my life is so short. Why did I have to go? My mom won’t stop crying. Pressing her cheek against mine. What did I do to deserve this? Why didn’t God just let me live to say good-bye?! “Adam, you’re just a boy…You can’t die. You can’t die so soon Adam! My son…” She cried. Her eyes are so red, that her eye color starts to fade. I try so hard to shout, “Mom! I want to come back so bad! Please just stop crying! Please…” but nothing comes out. Again. God, please, come get me. I don’t wanna be here anymore! Jesus, come show me what I’ve done to deserve this!
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On November 29th 2007 CaityLove Said : | |
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LOL i didn't know you were gonna read this one! :) I meant [Suicide] |
| On November 29th 2007 kg108551 Said : | |
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Ooah! Me likey! :D |
| On November 26th 2007 CaityLove Said : | |
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Im about to add some more |
| On November 26th 2007 richbitch0607 Said : | |
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I Love This Story also!
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| On November 26th 2007 Tiffanyluvzyew Said : | |
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OMG! I LUV DIS STORY |
