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Day in the Life of Teenage Hormones(into)

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Epic Created on 6-24-08 Views(300) Story Rating G

♥ It started out like any other day. The usual I went to school, talked with friends, and went home.  But unlike my usual day I decide to stay up a while seeing as my first class tomorrow is canceled. So I was just sitting in my parent’s living room watching a movie when my older brother came down stairs and walked right out of the house. He didn’t even notice me there. I was wondering where a 17 year old boy go at eleven in the evening? I didn’t even know why he wouldn’t even say anything to me. We have always been close. We could always tell each other everything. But at the time I didn’t think anything of it until now.

   

Sitting in this dark room makes you think of your family no matter how mad at them you are. This is all my brothers fault if he didn’t get involved or just decided to stay home I would be fine. If it weren’t for him I wouldn’t be wondering if I would ever see any of my family again or even if I would see light again. ♥

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On September 12th 2008 erickagere Said :
erickagere Good beginning..I'm already coming up with conclusions.
On August 6th 2008 depressionsux6 Said :
depressionsux6 i like this...
On July 20th 2008 thevickb Said :
thevickb Sounds really good kmp, :]
On July 8th 2008 depressionsux6 Said :
depressionsux6 wow----thats good---ima read all the ones you have up on this place...^.^
On June 30th 2008 disneyfan12 Said :
disneyfan12 KMP♥
On June 25th 2008 rebelshawtieyo Said :
rebelshawtieyo yep... gotta go read part two now =) great story!! kmp!
On June 24th 2008 Baillie010 Said :
Baillie010 wow...i like it...keep me posted
On June 24th 2008 chayeah22 Said :
chayeah22 I like it. KMP!
On June 24th 2008 cokoocokies Said :
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