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"Tristen! Tristen!"
Tristen heard his name being called for. But he just kept running threw the woods. He didn't care anymore. He want to get out of there. He wanted nothing to do with his family.
Tristen was a 17 year old country boy. His life was always messed up. So tonight was the night he was going to start over new. But little did he know. He was making the biggest mistake if his life.
Earlier That Day
"Tristen, dinner's ready." His mother yelled threw the house from the kitchen.
He left his room and went to the kitchen to see his mother fixing his plate for him.
"Are you hungry?" His mother asked him.
Tristen just looked at her then walked over to the table and sat down.
"Tristen, are you okay?" His mother asked him. "Yea." He answered.
"Well, you don't act like it." She said while walking over to the table and setting his plate down in front if him then putting her hand on his forehead to check for a temperater. "You're not sick. Are you sure you're okay?" His mother asked again.
"Ma, I'm fine." Tristen said then started eating his dinner.
"Okay. Can you blame a mother for being a little curious about her son?"
"I'm sorry, I guess, I'm just not in a good mood." He said.
"Well, I guess that's not your fault. I know how hard it is being a teenager. I know how hard your father has been on you, making you work out in that hot sun everyday on the field too. I know, it's not easy." His mother said.
"Yea? How do you know?" Tristen asked her.
"Because I was once a teenager.." She started
"Yea, but you didn't have to go out in the feilds and do all that hard work." He interupted.
"No, but I had to make dinner and clean and do so much other stuff because my mother died when I was just a little girl. Some days, I just felt like giving up on my family and running away from everything I had, everyone I knew. The things I loved. But I didn't, I always pulled myself together at the end of the day, and it all was better. Now I realize that if I would have left, I would have never had you and your little sister." She finished.
"What about dad?" Tristen asked.
She looked at him for a few minutes. "Your father, he's something I wouldn't have looked back on. Even though we aren't together anymore, doesn't meen we aren't all a happy family."
Tristen stopped eating and said, "I'm full." Then walked away from the table.
His mother watched him walk away, wondering why he did.
Tristen went to his room and changed his clothes. Then he quickly got out of the house and headed for his truck.
He got in and slammed his door shut. He put his hands on the wheel and sat there staring threw the wind sheld glass. He leaned over and opened the glove department and took his keys out and started the truck up. He sat there for a little longer than started driving, he drove down a dirt road, then finally reached the main road.
After driving almost 2 miles, he pulled over and the car came to a stop. He got out and slammed the door as hard as he could. He walked into the weeds and then down a hill, he eventually came to a field, he walked threw it then stopped after a while. He looked up at the sky it was a little cloudy. He sat down on the grass.
Then he heard a scream, it sounded like a girl. He turned around and saw a girl running from the woods. She was screaming and she looked like she was crying. Tristen stood up. Then he saw a guy running after her and yelling, "Come back here!"
Tristen started walking towards the girl.
Tell me what you think about it so far and if a lot of people like it, I'll write more.
Comments
| On October 30th 2008 gothlvr98 Said : | |
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wow. that was really good. I really liked the ending, suspense is cool. Really good job! |
| On October 26th 2008 XxXastinXxX Said : | |
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AMAZING!!! :]]]] |
| On March 7th 2008 Pinkgrl5906 Said : | |
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& ur a REALLY good writer! |
| On March 7th 2008 Pinkgrl5906 Said : | |
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thats a very nice peice of writing u have here billy the punk rocker (ok sorry i just had to say that im oober hyper!) |
| On February 9th 2008 sweetie1294 Said : | |
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it akes me want to read more and i hate reading |
| On February 4th 2008 1PanPan Said : | |
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wow |
| On December 24th 2007 pure0wn23 Said : | |
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wow wouldnt expect a story like this from a guy like you, but its pretty good |
| On December 2nd 2007 SoraDemon Said : | |
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awsome cant wait to read more |
| On November 9th 2007 Jabbie1993 Said : | |
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really good |
| On October 30th 2007 krislynn08 Said : | |
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wow this is really good |
| On October 8th 2007 betyoucantgess Said : | |
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i lied, you are an amazing writer!!!!!!!!! |
| On October 8th 2007 betyoucantgess Said : | |
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you are a good writer, more!!!!! |
| On October 3rd 2007 JessicaLinn90 Said : | |
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MORE PLEASE! I love it! =] |
| On October 1st 2007 HazelPoetry Said : | |
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I'd like to know what happens next please. |
| On September 20th 2007 softballdemon Said : | |
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ooooh I'm excited to read more. keep me updated please? |
| On September 8th 2007 spazzattacks76 Said : | |
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Oh is really good. Keep me posted. |
| On September 8th 2007 twilightx28 Said : | |
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I like this. |
| On September 8th 2007 SaMthePrimo Said : | |
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woww you're a great writer, i'm intrigued :D |
| On August 31st 2007 metzymutzy Said : | |
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Wow. Thats really good. I can't wait to read the rest of it! You're a REALLY good writer. |
| On August 31st 2007 pruetta Said : | |
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love it |
| On August 29th 2007 Aegle Said : | |
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GASP. whats gonna happen next. keep me posted please? i like it. I didn't even see the last part coming
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| On August 25th 2007 honeyyrider007 Said : | |
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i like it ;0) |
| On August 25th 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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Great story so far! Plz keep me posted! |
| On August 24th 2007 phhs2010marie Said : | |
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OOOOOOOOO now I must know whats goin on wiff that girl! I must, I must! lol. keep writing =]] |
| On August 24th 2007 101091 Said : | |
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I like it. Great beginning. Would you please let me know when the next one is up? |


