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Nanashi's Tale Chpater 4

Fiction Created on 9-6-07 Views(146) Story Rating G

      He was already aimed at my heart, and he fired. I moved, but not fast enough. It had missed its mark, my heart, and instead went through my left arm. I tripped over the dead guard's body when I moved, and fell into the poodle of black blood his neck wound had formed. Right there in front of my face were the guard's twin silver daggers. I grabbed them and struggled up in pain.

      My anger and hatred built up so much, that I lost control of it again. My eyes got a darker shade of red than before. I could feel the skin on my shoulderblades tighten, and I screamed out in pain as they tore out of my back once again, with a geyser of blood. I looked at my right arm, it was taking on the metallic appearance and feel again.

      He had reloaded again, and fired once more. A quick flash of silver as I swung the right dagger, and the bolt was flipping through the air from being knocked off course.

      "Karyudo, huh? I'll show you to interfere in my fucking business. I'm tired of the bullshitting fuckers like you that think you can walk over me because I seem weak."

      I ran towards him as he drew his swords. I swung the left dagger at his throat, but, in a shower of sparks, he blocked my attack. I pulled the dagger back, and quickly spun to the right. I raised up the right dagger and aimed it for his throat. The speed of my spin had thrown him off-guard. He wasn't expecting it this time, I would kill him now...

      A whip came from behind me and wrapped around my right wirst so tight that I could feel it through the steel of my arm.

      "Paralyze."

      I heard something that would be the description of the siren's voice from the old legends. I turned, right before mine and Karyude's bodies went limp, and saw a woman with the beauty of a Goddess. She was humming some type of melodic tune that was paralyzing. her voice was too good to move at all. She was 5'5" with jet black, medium hair that had natural blue highlights throughout it. Her eyes were as green as green could get, but it was hypnotizing to stare into them, just like listening to her voice. She was dressed in black pleather pants that were tight enough to keep from ruffling when she was trying to sneak, yet loose enough to allow completely free movement, a black turtleneck, which I saw was sleeveless as the wind blew her pleather jacket when she walked. She had a hoop in the middle of her lower lip, with a chain on it that went to another hoop in her upper right ear. Five studded sapphires ran up the sides of both her ears. Her skin was a pale-cream color, and in her right hand was the whip that was still wrapped around my right arm.

      I regained control of my voice, but it was hard for me to talk.

      "N-not another f-f-fucking person tr-trying to i-inter-interfere. Th-this is m-my fight d-damnit."

      She stopped humming, but me and Karyudo were still paralyzed. I guess it had been a speel that she cast by singing.

      "I am Angelestia Amaya Strauss. You do not realise what will be happening soon. You do not need to fight your own darksided people, but to wait for the signal of those who wish to eradicate the darkness..."

      I heard a voice behind her, and saw the first guard come running up, halberd in his hand.

      "Jin, what the hell did they do to you? I am captain Lance Sarin, and you fuckers killed one of my best men. No more jail, this time you all die. Awaken spirit of the golden dragon."

      I watched as the golden dragon began to hover over the clearing. A light suddenly shot out from the dragon's heart, and went into Lance's heart. Lance's blonde hair lengthened to his shoulderblades. His skin began to change from its smooth appearance, to scaly and cracked, like the dragon's. His eyes turned a light golden color, and his pupils took on a slitted appearance. Claws began to grow in place of his fingernails, and two giant, golden dragon wings sprouted from his back. I looked for any sign of pain from his wings, but there was none.

      "Alright guys, if either one of you want to live, you're gonna have to get along for five fucking minutes. None of us have the power to fight this guy alone.

      "Fine, I'll put up with Karyudo for five minutes. This is one of the fuckers I was planning on coming back for anyway. But you had better release us if you want us to do more than lie here."

      I saw her open her mouth to say something, but Lance had darted foward and hit her with his left hand. I saw her fall to the ground, and she got right back up. Her hair flaired up, as the same black blood ran down her lip where it had busted open. The blue in her hair changed from blue, to dark red, and sections of it started to grow to lengths of at least 5' and start snapping like whips.

      "Release from paralysis."

      I could move again, and I went to jump up. I almost blacked out from the immense pain that shot through my body. I had forgotten about my other injuries. I dropped to my knees and onto my hands, trying not to black out.

      "Curaga."

      A light surrounded me for a brief moment, and everything was restored. My energy and strength were restored as my wounds closed and formed into scars, including the one that was on my left eye. I closed my eyes, focussing all of my hatred together. I could feel the black and red aura return to me, and it started sending out bolts of pure hatred as it built up more and more. I opened my eyes, and looked into those of Lance.

      "Alright Mr. Dumbfuck, I told you once I don't have time for your bullshit. Now you're gonna see what I can really do. Flare-dyne..."

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On September 8th 2007 Biggun221 Said :
Biggun221 Another side note: That's supposed to be "black *puddle* of blood" not poodle
On September 8th 2007 sammies843 Said :
sammies843 HELL FRIGGEN YEAH!!!! no probs with the lending of my char... you know that you can ask for anything and I'd do my best to get it to you... :D:D that's freakin' awesome!!! I love it!!! and I love you babe!!! :D:D
~Sammie
On September 7th 2007 foxridergirl09 Said :
foxridergirl09 omg bryan i love it plz plz plz keep me posted on ur story and K plz
On September 6th 2007 phhs2010marie Said :
phhs2010marie wow.....I love your story so far......KEEP WRITING!! =]]] yes. do, please. teehee.
On September 6th 2007 CaPlanePourToi Said :
CaPlanePourToi oooooooooo :)
On September 6th 2007 Biggun221 Said :
Biggun221 Side note: Thanks Sammie for Angelestia.