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Defying Forever! Pt. 13

Creative Created on 4-1-08 Views(287) Story Rating G

     With a resigned sigh she turned and with only a moment’s hesitation threw them open wide.

       

     He gasped as the light of the sun spilled forth filling his room with it’s brightness for the first time in his life.  He waited for the expected agonizing burn but non came.  Only the mild warmth spreading across his pale skin. 

       

     At the first shot of light he had covered his eyes from the unexpected brightness now squinting he lowered that hand. 

       

     His body was in a tumult of emotions.  Joy being the triumph of them all.  Nothing could fathom the joy he felt at that moment realizing that it was over.  His days of being a monster were gone.

       

     He felt a moment’s doubt.  Could it really be true?  Was forty-seven years of vampirism really gone leaving him to begin in the body he now contained and to age just like all the others?  Like Anna? 

       

     He looked over to Anna who stood by the window gazing at him with concern.  He held out his hand for her to come closer.  He watched as the sun’s rays reflected brightly off of Anna’s hair. 

       

     She knelt down beside his bed and he grasped her face lightly in his hands tracing the line of her jaw, her nose, her eyes; memorizing every contour of his love’s face.  

       

     He laughed lightly, tears coming to his eyes but he refused to allow them to fall.  He could not rid the smile from his face as she gazed at him in bewilderment.  “My precious rose,” he whispered.

       

     Her brows came together.  “What’s the matter?”

       

     “Nothing,” he laughed.  “Absolutely nothing!” with that outburst he pulled her to him and kissed her with as much joy he felt.

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*i apologize that it's taking so long and I know how that can be frustraiting but with my grandma having cancer and being in the hospital it seems like i don't have time for alot of things.  I promise defying forever close to being finished.  Hope you enjoy the rest of the story! ~Baillie~ 

 

 

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On August 27th 2008 VampirateRaven Said :
VampirateRaven awww, sorry to hear that hunni... hope she gets better soon, and loving this!
On July 21st 2008 chorusgal Said :
chorusgal I hope you can finish it sometime soon I like it
On July 7th 2008 cocopuff2005 Said :
cocopuff2005 well i loke it so no worries
On July 5th 2008 Baillie010 Said :
Baillie010 To anyone who reads this even though i said I would im afraid I won't be posting anymore on defying forever...i liked this ending much better than the one i had planned and I think u would have too! SORRY!
On June 24th 2008 anbo123 Said :
anbo123 KMP
On May 27th 2008 BlackRoseVamp1 Said :
BlackRoseVamp1 kmpp
On April 30th 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 kmpp!!!
On April 18th 2008 CRISSY10012 Said :
CRISSY10012 love it keep me posted please
On April 13th 2008 wolfsheba Said :
wolfsheba love it
On April 13th 2008 wolfsheba Said :
wolfsheba love it
On April 11th 2008 megEgurl Said :
megEgurl omg love it!!! Baillie u gotta post more lol let me know chick!
On April 6th 2008 lifesagame021 Said :
lifesagame021 THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ U R SO TALENTED!KEEP WRITING AND KMP!
On April 4th 2008 7unicornrings Said :
7unicornrings aww yay ^_^ im so happy for the two of them! XD
On April 3rd 2008 cocopuff2005 Said :
cocopuff2005 its wonderful and i am sorry bout ur grandma
On April 3rd 2008 KibaFanatic Said :
KibaFanatic OMG SHIT THATS AWESOME!!!!! KMP KMP KMP KMP KMP KMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
On April 2nd 2008 KimSmallwood Said :
KimSmallwood omgomg!! this is great!! =] i am soooooo happy for them now!? =] eep.! =] kmp!!
On April 2nd 2008 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen yay!! he didn't get roasted by the sun =]
keep me posted!!
On April 2nd 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x plz kmp! :)
On April 2nd 2008 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 I LOVE IT!!! yay!! I'm sorry about your grandma. I hope it gets better! :D
On April 2nd 2008 C4444 Said :
C4444 AHHHHHHHH!!!Baillie the story is so good hate for it to end make it good!!!! kmp :)