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Defying Forever! Pt. 11

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      He could not swallow more than half for as soon as the liquid began it’s decent down his throat it began to burn.  Starting with his throat then more slowly moving throughout his body and a long agonizing process.

      

      He tried to speak to say anything but the burning sensation would not allow it. 

       

     As if the pain running down his throat was not enough he was caught off guard by the sudden piercing pain in his hand.  He looked down to see that in his agony his had clutched the glass vile so tightly In his hand that it had shattered and split open his hand and now what remained liquid had been in the vile was now happily infecting his blood with it’s burning.

       

     He managed to drop the shattered vile from his hand but he could do little more than that.  The pain was intense and beginning to reach the pits of his very stomach.

       

     Now that the liquid had infected his blood it was freely running through his veins causing the burning sensation to fill his body more quickly.

       

    He collapsed to his knees barely comprehending what was happening to him.  The pain was so mind numbing that it felt as though he was not apart of his body but floating above in a mindless hover.

       

     He returned with a deafening crash which oddly sounded like a hoarse scream and with a start he realized it was he who had let out such a scream of agony.

       

     He fell forward from his position of sitting on his knees.

       

     The door to the study was opened and he could barely understand the fact that voices were surrounding him. 

       

     Nothing made sense anymore.  Only the flames that now had consumed every inch of his body. 

       

     Time seemed to last forever before the pain began to dull, and then he realized it was not the pain that was dulling but himself as darkness began to slowly pull him under and he knew that he had to be dying for no one could survive pain such as this.  And for that moment before he was completely consumed he knew death would even be welcomed if it would only take away the pain. 

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On March 24th 2008 7unicornrings Said :
7unicornrings AAAAAAAAAAAHH!!!!! NO NO NO!!!! hes NOT dead..right? *pout* well i guess ill go c in the next chapter! *flips page* wait..that only works w/ books...
On March 20th 2008 sadowski89 Said :
sadowski89 omg omg i cant wait to find out whats gonna happen i hope u write another one soon!!!!!!!! kmp plz
On March 13th 2008 wolfsheba Said :
wolfsheba omg keep writting
On March 10th 2008 KimSmallwood Said :
KimSmallwood omg!! i hope he doesn't die! kmp!!
On March 10th 2008 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen love it!!!!
keep me posted
On March 10th 2008 cocopuff2005 Said :
cocopuff2005 love it =D
On March 10th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 omg this is really getting intense. Keep it up! :) KMP
On March 10th 2008 dsouthernlily Said :
my picture
suspenseful
On March 9th 2008 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 wow this is really intense....i cant wait to hear what happens next. plz kmp
On March 9th 2008 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 wowzers!! keep it up!! :D
On March 8th 2008 C4444 Said :
C4444 Whoa!!!! Baillie the story is getting so good!!! keep it up I was wandering if you were still living, I give it 2 thumbs up if it would let me.. Awesome job.... As always KMP!!!! :) Chaz
On March 8th 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 i cannot wait for the next one! please kmp