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Defying Forever! Pt. 1

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(((okay so here's the summary of Bite Me Beautful to any fans who may be reading this and have not read BMB.  Elva Parker was 23 when her life was saved by Demetris Nightwalker.  Unfortunately she didn't realize that Demetris had a purpose of his own.  No more than a week later Elva discovered that Demetris was a vampire and that she possessed a certain blood type in which enabled her to become a vampire. Not only that...it meant that she was the one destined to marry the prince of the vampire and because she posseses the blood type it means she can help the vampire race by having children.  When Elva wakes into her new life, at fist she is furious but after time she begins to accept it and three months from the wedding she discovers she's pregnant.  Months pass and when she is only weks away from birth she is kidnapped by vampire hunters who want to expierement on her children once they were born in hopes of finally finishing their cure of vampires that would turn them to their human forms.  She gives birth to twins while she is there and when they try to take them they also try to kill her and Demetris's father who was also captured is killed trying to protect her.  She then goes on a rampage and kills most of the vampire hunters but it soon found by Demetris who take her and his children home and also takes the "cure" and locks it away where no one can find it.  This story is now 100 years after this has all happened.)))

(((my first part is a little slow but i promise the next one is a little faster paced...i had to post this so u can understand the 2nd part. =D enjoy!!)))

 PART 1!!!

      He watched from a distance as his oldest brother spoke in hushed tone to his parents.   It had been a week since he had watched the exchange between his parents and Darius when Darius discovered the woman that possessed the special blood type in which meant that she could be changed and would become his wife and not but an hour ago he had returned bearing the unconscious woman in his arms. 

       

      The most surprising part was that he had not changed her yet.  Surprising considering he was so much like their father Demetris most believed he would do the same as he had and bite her first before bringing her to the castle. 

       

     He sighed and turned and made his way to his room.  Being the twelfth child of twenty-two Vayden felt like a total outcast from his entire family.  It seemed as though all of the children had a purpose in their existence but him. 

       

     Luna the oldest of them all was helping in leading—with her new mate—another coven of vampires in England.  Darius of course was already well on his way in his future.  After he changed and married the woman he would become king in fifty years destined to have children of his own. 

       

     Vayden’s other brothers and sisters were not in the least bit concerned about the future of their life.  They were perfectly content with the life they had been given.  They did not care that they had all been born blood-thirsty monsters who preyed on creatures at night and never had the chance to see the sun rise or set.  Never get to taste the different tastes of human food. 

       

      They didn’t care but he did.  He hated living the life he lived.  The life he had been born into.  He couldn’t take it anymore! He had to get away.

       

     This had been slowly building up inside him in the forty seven years he had been alive or dead or whatever it was vampires were considered.  Even with his many years his body portrayed the looks of a young man of no more than twenty-two.    

       

     He shook his head and began pacing.  Could he really do this?  Where would he go?  What would he do?

       

     He stepped outside his room and began pacing the halls of the mansion where he could find himself lost among the many doors.

       

     “Vayden, Vayden!” a small tiny voice came from behind him.  He turned to see his sister Hayla who was just three years old running toward him  .

       

     He smiled slightly and picked her up in his arms.  “What’s wrong?”

       

     She placed her hands on either side of his face and peered at him closely with her child like concern.  “Big brother seems sad.  Why are you sad?”

       

     He chuckled forcibly.  It was surprising how observant you can be when you are so young.  He leaned forward and wiggled his nose against hers.  “Big brother’s not sad, just a little tired. Everything will be alright tomorrow.” Of that he was sure for he planned to be out of here within the hour.  It had all been decided in his mind; he would leave and explore the world around him for the first time on his own.

       

     She looked at him before smiling; her unnaturally white teeth gleaming brightly. “Will big brother come play with me?”

           

     He shook his head.  “I’m sorry but big brother he has to do.  Why don’t you go see mother with baby Maleena.  You know you’re a big girl now and have to teach your little sister how to do things right.”
           

     “B-but won’t you just play one game?”

           

     “No…I have big kid stuff to do.”

           

     She bowed her head in disappointment.  “Alright,” he placed her back onto the dark carpet.  “I’ll go see if Darus will let me play with the pretty lady he brought home today,” she exclaimed pronouncing Darius in the only way she knew how before running excitedly down the corridor. 

           

     Vayden leaned heavily against the wall next to him.  He was going to really do it.  He was going to leave.  He would leave this place behind and try to find something for himself.  Maybe he would come back but maybe not. 

           

     He pushed away from the wall purpose in his walk as he strode to his room. 

           

     An hour later found him silently sleeking through the corridors and to the grand hall, a large black bag slung across his shoulder.  He sneaked his way through the large oak doors and using his vampire speed quickly jumped the gates and avoided all possible confrontation with the guards by hiding among the trees in the forest. 

           

      He smiled to himself. He had made it away quickly and without incident.  He thought about the note he had left in his room for someone to find.  The only one who would really notice his disappearance would be Hayla who only liked him when she needed someone to play with.

           

     He shook his head.  He would not worry about them any longer.  It was time to begin his new life.

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On February 19th 2008 KimSmallwood Said :
KimSmallwood awww poor outcasted vampire. keep me posted. i can't wait to hear more, considering the fact that Bite Me Beautiful was AMAZING! =]
On November 22nd 2007 MangoXCaffeine Said :
MangoXCaffeine sweet
On October 8th 2007 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 I thought it would be about Darius hahaha. poor Vayden!! Hope he makes it okay on his own...-goes to next chapter to find out more!!-
On October 8th 2007 7unicornrings Said :
7unicornrings aw poor wittle Vayden...=D
On September 28th 2007 wolfsheba Said :
wolfsheba wow...keep me posted
On September 28th 2007 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 this is really good. keep me posted.
On September 27th 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 Aww poor Vayden. Keep me posted??
On September 26th 2007 mandamay91 Said :
mandamay91 And to think, I thought this one would be about Daruis...Please keep me posted!
On September 26th 2007 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen Love it
please keep me posted
On September 26th 2007 lalaloca2 Said :
lalaloca2 THIS IS FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz KEEP ME POSTED! =]
On September 26th 2007 softballdemon Said :
softballdemon I absolutely love it I can't wait for more. Let me know when more's posted.
On September 25th 2007 cocopuff2005 Said :
cocopuff2005 love it!
On September 25th 2007 spazzattacks76 Said :
spazzattacks76 EEEEEEEEEEEEEEK! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! I LOVE IT! Keep me posted!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
On September 25th 2007 gahmmmblah Said :
gahmmmblah its great! i love BMB and I can't wait for this story to unfold! keep me posted if you can!
On September 25th 2007 username685 Said :
username685 keep me posted
On September 25th 2007 omfg010203 Said :
my picture
poor vayden...so great!
On September 25th 2007 BiAnIcole Said :
BiAnIcole aweee!!!! its awesome so farr please please keep me posted =]=]=]=]
On September 25th 2007 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 YAY!! i LOVES IT!!! an you are such an AWESOME writer!! keep it up