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Defying Forever! PREFACE
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 Created on 9-18-07
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((Author's Note:: what your about to read is the sequel to my story 'Bite Me Beautiful.' I'm gonna try to get each part up as quick as possible but with school and all it might be a bit slow. Maybe one every week or so...=P but ill try my hardest! Hope ya enjoy!))
PREFACE.......
Fire and pain erupted throughout his body. The liquid poured from his hands and he cried out in agony. Every sense in his body came alive with the pain that was going through him now.
Had he made a mistake? Maybe it was not worth it anymore. Maybe he could just die now on the hardwood floor that was stained with his dark blood.
All he had wanted was what his bother had. Something to call his own. Something that could mean so much to him.
His fangs poked into his lips repeatedly causing blood to pool into his mouth. He spat the large glob out and curled up into a small ball upon the floor.
His stomach wrenched and bile rose to mingle with the blood. For a moment he believed he was going to vomit but unfortunately it stayed agonizingly in his stomach.
The tears flowed freely in small rivulets across his cheeks. Please just let me die now, he thought to himself as black spots flowed across his vision. Yes, it would be soon.
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Comments
Please Login to post comments| On August 27th 2008 VampirateRaven Said : | |
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AWWW! thats so sad... lol |
| On December 14th 2007 Khmerfriendz Said : | |
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that was tought. keep me posted! |
| On October 8th 2007 JWalker2406 Said : | |
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Love the preface!! :D Very descriptive I like it!! |
| On October 8th 2007 7unicornrings Said : | |
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wow! i gotta know what happens!! |
| On October 6th 2007 KibaFanatic Said : | |
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coolio
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| On September 28th 2007 wolfsheba Said : | |
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cool |
| On September 28th 2007 krislynn08 Said : | |
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ooo so good keep me posted
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| On September 19th 2007 spazzattacks76 Said : | |
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WHOA! MORE MORE MORE! I LOVE IT :D:D:D:D:D:D |
| On September 19th 2007 username685 Said : | |
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what no go on |
| On September 19th 2007 twilightx28 Said : | |
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Oh man. Another fabulous preface for another fabulous story, I'm sure. Lol. Keep me posted?? |
| On September 19th 2007 whitneyleighh Said : | |
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i love it.
please please keep me posted=] |
| On September 19th 2007 atavanhalen Said : | |
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Sounds like a winner. |
| On September 19th 2007 lalaloca2 Said : | |
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oh WOW! this sounds freakin good! PLZ KEEP ME POSTED!! |
| On September 18th 2007 bluedragon22 Said : | |
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ooooooh!!!!! this sounds awesome, i can't wait for the rest of it..... |
| On September 18th 2007 omfg010203 Said : | |
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hmmmm.....lovee this!! but who is it?? their son?? hmmm...well..keep me posted...great! |
| On September 18th 2007 vegxjen Said : | |
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woohoo!! sequel. =]]]] keep me posted |
| On September 18th 2007 cocopuff2005 Said : | |
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holy cow i love it! keep me posted please! |
| On September 18th 2007 lvm3932 Said : | |
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oh yes i love you lol im so glad your writing a sequal to this cause your such a good writter and i liked the way you were going with the other story and i am looking forward to reading this story its amazing so far very descriptive as always lol ....thanks and please keep me posted |
| On September 18th 2007 jirrith2007 Said : | |
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AHH!! i love it already!! keep me posted, once again!! |
| On September 18th 2007 BiAnIcole Said : | |
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ohhhhhh!!! more more me likeyyy =]=]=] realle gr8 beginingg i cant waittt for this storii i absolutely was in love with BMB |
| On September 18th 2007 rumcake2daend Said : | |
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wow it grabbed my attention at the title and reeled me in and i just couldn't stop reading! you have an amazing talent its great to see it being put to use. well please keep me posted i love it!! |
