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   We all followed the doctor, the hall seemed to be getting longer with each step. Everything was getting blurry. I focused on the back of the doctors coat, and atempt to clear my mind. In fear of colapsing onto hospital floor. Okay lets calm down, take a deep breath in and slowly let it out, I think to myself. This is not working, lets think about...ohhhh what makes me happy? That Dragonfly...that park, the calming breeze.

   "Okay we're hear!" The doctor spun around to face us.

   "Please do not touch any part of his head or face. Its rare bringing people into see patiens so early after sergury. But its better that we know how his condition is now, so that if there is anything wrong, we can provide the right treatement or in this case brain exersize."

   The doctor started opening the door. Then stopped before it was open all the way.

   "Oh and...never mind just go on in."

   I slipped inside ahead of everyone. I stopped abruptly and the doctor nearly pushed me to the ground. As he slammed into my back.

   "Oops sorry." he said embarassed, as he slipped ahead of me to check on the equiptement hooked up to him.

   I walked in a little futher and stood against the wall. I could already tell he didn't remember me. He lay there blankly starring at me from across the room.

   His mom and my mom quickly went to his side. He looked over at them and smilled.

   "Hi baby." His mother cooed.

   "Hi..." he said with a raspy voice.

   "Honey I need you to answer a few questions for me ok?"

   "Ok."

   "Do you know who this is?" she said pointing to my mom.

   "Yeah thats Mrs. Blosad our neighbor." he said annoyed, wondering why they were asking him these stupid questions.

   "Ok good, now who is this?" she said pointing to me.

   "Uhm..." he said looking at me.

   "A person I've never met before..."

   "This is Afya, honey...don't you remeber?"

   He just kept starring at me expressionless. Why me? The only friend I have...doesn't remeber me. Everyone was looking at me now, the doctor, my mom, his mom, and him. They're all waiting to see what I'm going to do. God herself was probably looking at me...

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On February 14th 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb awwh....indeed..:(
On February 7th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Shit...That sux, Very good so far, keep it comin
On February 4th 2008 AlexINTJ Said :
AlexINTJ Oh, dear :(
On February 4th 2008 october1015 Said :
october1015 Omg that's so sad! Wow...good job! LONGER PLEASE
On February 3rd 2008 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 aww..that ssad. aweseome job