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The Irreversible Dragonfly: #9
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I sigh as i sit back down in the hospital waiting room. Breathing hard from the adrenaline rush. Those stupid docotrs. Half these people are practically dying in their seats waiting for medical attention! Suddenly a voice interupts my mental rant of anger.
"Miss?"
I look up, to see a doctor standing in front of me. He is a fairly young doctor. His hair is dark almost black, and has perfect dark eyebrows making his bright green eyes pop.
"We would like to thank you for notifying us of the illl patient."
"Yeah...no problem."
"Are you here for... Jerret?" He said looking down at his clipboard.
I leap from my chair.
"Yes..."
"My name is Dr. Feebes." He extended a hand.
I looked down at it, he still had a sergical glove on. Which was covered in slimey wet blood. He must have noticed my long pause, cause he quickly pulled his hand away.
"Shit... I'll be right back." He quickly jogged out of the waiting room.
"That was weird..." I said sitting back down.
My mom just shrugged, and we st there in silence untill he returned.
"Sorry about that." He said.
"I haven't slept in a while, as you can tell. Anyway i'm Dr. Feebes and I operated on Jerret."
"How is he?!" I said quickly, noticing Jerret's and my mom standing up now.
"Well he seems fine, he passed all of his mental tests, but we need your help to test part of his brain that holds long term memory. He is awake now and we would like to test this before he falls asleep again."
"So your saying he might not... remember us?" I said slowly.
"Yes..."
"But where the tumor was located shouldn't effect his long term memory!" concern in my voice.
"Unfourtunatly we found an extra tumor located in that area... did another doctor come and talk to you before the operation?" The doctor spoke slowly, giving me a strange look.
"No...?" I say, giving him the same look.
"Then... how do you know so much about this?"
"I just do okay, now can we please go see Jerret?!"
"Oh... sorry, yes follow me..."
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| On February 14th 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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Impressive, impressive.. |
| On February 4th 2008 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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Just amazing writing :) |
| On February 3rd 2008 cloud132475860 Said : | |
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Great i had to read the other ones to catch me up and its great so far |
| On February 2nd 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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....and?... |
| On February 2nd 2008 october1015 Said : | |
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Good job! Still needs to be longer though.. But still good job. |
| On February 2nd 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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It would be horrible if he forgot her....:( But i like the story |
| On February 1st 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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aww poor guy, hopefully he remembers them. nice job |


