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The Irreversible Dragonfly: #3

Other Created on 12-12-07 Views(90) Story Rating G

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   Theres a fire, and I'm trapped inside the burning building. I calmly feel around for a fire escape. Yet there is none to be found. Panicing now, I stand up and start frantically feeling around the room. I bump into unknown objects, as thoughts of death run through my mind. I trip over something and smash my head on what seems to be a desk or table. I fall to the floor unconsious. I quickly awaken and feel around for a wall to steady my head with. The room is spinning. I now have a pounding headace and to top if all off its getting harder to breathe. I find a corner and rest my head against the wall. To weak to move from lack of oxygen and diziness. Its getting harder and harder to breathe, everything seems to be fading. I feel as though I am far away from everything that is happening. I drowsily look into the smoke I see a light. There is something comming out towords me. It flutters over to me and lands on my shoe. Its the drangonfly...

   The sudden smell woke me from my day dream. I look up from the ground and see Deltie City aproaching in the distance. I look up into the sky, the sun is just about to touch the earth.

   "OH NO! I'm gonna be late!" I said to myself.

   I start pedelling faster, so I can make it to "Le Petite Cafe!" in time for dinner with my friend Jarret.

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On December 30th 2007 AlexINTJ Said :
AlexINTJ Peculiar, but intriguing. I liked it.
On December 23rd 2007 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb wow what a twist, very nice!
On December 22nd 2007 october1015 Said :
october1015 I'm still liking it!!
On December 19th 2007 chayeah22 Said :
chayeah22 Very nice...its different! I love it!
On December 14th 2007 dRockL0v3ZyoU Said :
dRockL0v3ZyoU i like it =] i had to read it twice, cuz it took me a couple seconds to figure out what you were going at. haha but i like it, its good =] keep it up...cant wait for part4=]
On December 14th 2007 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 This comment for all three, But I feel like you should put them together as one story and fill the holes, it has potenetial to be very good, but there is really no plot or story, just a few thoughts. They were good for the most part, but they do need a little work, keep it up.