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Oppisites Don't Work Prt 2
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Kalley was my seven year old sister, Everyne knew that she had a huge crush on Blaze so when ever I was with him she would question me like I killed someone so its a lil funny. But Kalley only called Blaze by his realy name RYAN i was the only persn who was aloud to call him Blaze. Im the only one wh knows why he has the nickname after setting his hand on fire.
"Why did you say that you love Ryan?" Kalley Questioned me
"Umm because I was saying it for you" I answered confusing myself
"Okay then just making sure your not messing with my man, Can you make me dinner yet?" She nagged sitting at the dinning table
"Sure, I'll make you grilled cheese"
I got everything out and made it two for her and half for me. After cleaning up and making sure Kalley wasn't going to inturupt me I went to my room and started to study. I went through my bag and I had Nicks phcyis book so he must of had mine "SHIT". Know I have to talk to him tomorrow =(.
The next morning I woke Kalley up and got her ready for school making her breakfast since my mom was asleep from last night work. We both got ready, I was wearing a pink and black plaid mini skirt with fishnets and my converses with a long sleeve white shirt with a white hood and heavy black eyeliner and my hair straighten and down . I was about to walk out the door when I grabed Nick hoodie and book I needed to return. Kalley always tried to look older in front of Blaze she would wear these old school shoes which made her taller. We were leaving and a knock at the door.
"Hello Ladies" Blaze greating smiling giving me a hug and then reaching down to give Kalley a hug.
"Hey Hero-boy can you take us to school please?" I begged
"Yeah sure why do you think I'm here Spade, You so blonde sometimes" He giggled leading the way to his car
"Nice skirt by the way" He teased flicking the back of it up.
After dropping Kalley off at her school next was my high school. It was easy to talk when Kalley wasn't there becasue she would drool all over Blaze or question me after about our convosations.
"Your my hero twice in a row" I Laughed put my head on Blazes shoulder while he was driving
"You bet someone had to saved the Spade In Stress" Blaze laughed Kissing my head
When we pulled up at the back of the school there was all Nicks friends making jokes and flirting with people who walked pass. Nick didn't notice anyone he was just standing around lauging at whatever they said.
"Thank you so much for the lift" I grovled while getting out fixing up my cloths
"No problem but I want a prize" Blaze laughed
I think Nick notice I was around when he heard my voice he tryed to look back without looking suspicias. I leant over to Blaze and gave him a kiss and hug through the door.
"Love ya Spade" Blaze yelled while I was walking away
I turned around and yelled back "Love ya Blaze"
People started to look at me, But I didn't care. I think Nick was a little anoyed when his friends started making comment on me like.
"Nice skirt did it come with a free razor and yelling at me that I was a emo whore"
After hearing the emo whore comment I turned around and smiled and then yelled "Yeah I get paid with razors ask Nick" I turned back around while everyone was shocked with my comeback.
"Hey Hailey, My baby how are you?" Asked my friend Jamie
Jamie was a guy but he was gay so he was one of the girls. He ahd bleach blonde hair and always wore his blue jeans and randoms t-shirts with his man-bag.
"Nothing, How are you sexy?" I asked back but I knew he wanted to know about Nick
"I'm good but I want to know about Nick, Is it true he uses man/style products in his hair and smells like them?" (Man/style is fake I didn't know any)
"I have no idea, but I need to see him sometime today and return his book and jacket" I said pulling out the jacket so jamie can find out if he uses Man/style or not.
"Its all a lie, He uses Stubourn products!" He laughed handing the jacket back to me.
"Come on, I need to go to my locker" I pulled Jamie along for the walk
I put in my code and opened and found a sticky-note thing from Nick "Meet me at the Libary we can study more"
I pushed the jacket in and grabbed my books for class, Everyone seemed to rember the comment I made about the emo-whore, So guy were making jokes about it too me.
After the long painfull day I went to my locker one more time too grab Nicks jacket and book so I could meet him at the libary. I walked out to the back of the school to Blazes car.
"Hey can you pick me up from the libary, In a hour or something" I begged
"Yeah sure, Get in I'll drop you off and then go get Kalley"
After pulling up at the libary I got out and gave Blaze a kiss on the cheak, for the ride and walked inside. Nick was at the back corner desk waiting for me he looked a lil angry.
"Hey Perfect, Whats wrong?" I asked sitting down across from him
"Umm, This isn't going to work I talked to Mr.Hellim (Our Phycis teacher) and he said we can be paired with different people" Nick said looking up at me
Inside Nicks head- I can tutor her if I'm starting to like her my friends would never let me go out with a emo or even be friends with one
"Was this about yesterday?" I asked
"No, Its just we don't seem to get along" He lied
"Yeah we do, We had fun yesterday rember" I asked starting to get anoyed
"Yeah, But you don't want to learn so why would I tutor you?" He said
"I will learn just teach me, No more jokes I promise give me one more shot" I smiled at him trying to win him over
"Umm, But, Fine" He studded
"Kool, so heres you book and hoodie from yesterday"
"Thanx, Heres you book how about we go get ice cream" Nick said while standing up
"I thought you wanted to study?"
"Come on," Nick nagged while pulling me up and pulling me out the libary
"Fine, you win this time Mr.Perfect" I joked letting him pull me
He let go and we starting walking side by side "I beat Princess, Go me" He cheered
We walked all thw way to the ice cream shop carrying out heavy book bags. We went to the ice cream shop were most kids our age don't go so none of our friends would see us together.
"So who's Blaze?" Nick ask while eating his choc mint ice cream
"My best friend" I answered while licking my bubblegum icecream
"Awk okay, He seems kool" He answered while watching me eat
"Do I have ice cream on my face or something" I asked wiping my face
"No, but you have nice eyes" Nick reply laughing at me freaking out about ice cream
"Mr.Perfect being nice again" I smiled "You have nice eyes too"
Comments
| On December 8th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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OMFG Nick is a sweety when he wants to be |
| On December 1st 2007 xboixlikexgirl Said : | |
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omg i love this story already
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| On October 29th 2007 lilprincess122 Said : | |
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O_O |
| On October 29th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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lol emo whore, i usually hate labling but i love this story :) |
| On October 12th 2007 alienz13 Said : | |
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omg keep me posted |
| On October 12th 2007 Aegle Said : | |
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PLEASE KEEP ME POSTED!!!!! i love its wonderfully written. EEK yaya/ |
| On October 12th 2007 guardgirl22 Said : | |
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love it! |
| On October 12th 2007 Baillie010 Said : | |
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wow i really love this story! keep me posted...=D |
| On October 12th 2007 Oddessy65 Said : | |
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I like it, it's cool. I agree with onaipwolf, though... I guess she wouldn't care because they've been friends for a long time?? I don't know... Anyway, Keep me posted! *~xODDx~* |
| On October 12th 2007 onaipwolf Said : | |
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It's ok. I was wondering why she didn't get upset when Blaze lifted up her skirt, or at least comment on it, but you just abruptly changed the scene. Your dialogue is pretty good, and your characters aren't too stereotyped, although you do rely on labels like 'emo' and 'prep' to describe your characters. |
| On October 12th 2007 jirrith2007 Said : | |
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i like its alot!! keep it up!! |
| On October 12th 2007 WaitingAlone Said : | |
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this is such a good story. those people who called her and emo whore are assholes. |
| On October 12th 2007 Ash94leigh Said : | |
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With the insult Emo-Whore, I've been called it and I said that come back so that bits true |


