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Teen Virgin Party
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"What did he do KRISSY tell me" I yelled into the phone
"He's umm raped me" Kirssy cryed
"Where are you I'll come get you I'll bring Callum for muscle tell me where you are!"
Krissy told me the address I ran and got jeans on still wearing my take top I just picked up a random Tee to go find Callum. By the time I found Callum outside working out I was in tears.
"Awwww babys crying, what happen a spider in your room?" Callum said teasing while putting his weights down
"I need you help before I do somthing really stupid!" I told
"Don't tell me you going to turn emo, Because we only had enough room in this family for one and thats Brent" Callum said looking at a picture of my real brother who killed himself (more on him later)
"SHUT UP!!! I NEED YOU PLEASE I'LL DO ANYTHING" I yelled crying more
"What do you need,It better not be sympathy"
"Krissy needs my help shes been raped " I finally yelded
As Callum heard that we were in the car speeding down the highway. Krissy was really easy to find. She was somewhere on the collage campus still just near a phrat house. When we pulled up Krissy didn't speak at all she didn't smile or even look at ether me or Callum.
"Do you want us to take you to the police Station?" I asked
Krissy shook her head. So we toke her home I try to say goodbye and hug her but she just walked inside and didn't look back.
"God I hope shes okay" I said trying to pray out loud
As we pulled up on the driveway there was a surprise for me. I walked up to our front door there was 12 sunflowers addressed to me. The little envolope had my ID inside and a note. "I owe you somthing more then these I really do like you Apolgise Will". As I read the note more of the night flashed back into my head.
{The stories changign alot sorry bout it if you don'tlike it tell me but in a nice way}
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| On March 25th 2008 EvilBonez17 Said : | |
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It's getting better and better in my opinion.Keep up the good work. |
| On December 8th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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loves it, i like how u write. |
| On October 29th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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love it.... |
| On October 12th 2007 monkey892 Said : | |
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i like it keep going!!
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| On October 12th 2007 thekoolkid13 Said : | |
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keep going i like it |
| On October 12th 2007 Bleed2stoptear Said : | |
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keep going they are really really good |
| On October 11th 2007 kittystahl Said : | |
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i love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it keep me posted dude it rocks u r a fucking awsome wrighter! |
| On October 11th 2007 dbgrandom Said : | |
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keep me posted |
| On October 11th 2007 dbgrandom Said : | |
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keep me posted |
| On October 11th 2007 starryboo Said : | |
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like it...already rated the other one... |
| On October 11th 2007 heathsgurl94 Said : | |
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its cool;keep me posted. |
| On October 11th 2007 Baillie010 Said : | |
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wow i really like this! will u plz keep me posted? |
| On October 11th 2007 Aegle Said : | |
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I love it don't worry I hope Krissy gets better and yes keep going. But maybe you could number the title so I know which one is which please? |
| On October 11th 2007 necrosiss Said : | |
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Nah the change is good, my story is changing as well. :] I like it keep me posted pls |
| On October 11th 2007 Lonelygurl222 Said : | |
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yeah change is good i love it keep me posted . |
| On October 11th 2007 raetakeninluv1 Said : | |
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keep me posted |
| On October 11th 2007 jdwluver Said : | |
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I cant wait for more and change is good. keep me posted |
| On October 11th 2007 onaipwolf Said : | |
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Don't worry about the story changing, that happens sometimes. I do think that she would me more upset about Callum mocking her brother, especially since he died in such a tragic way. Keep writing, I can't wait to read the next chapter. :) |
| On October 11th 2007 Ash94leigh Said : | |
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Write me comment I love them |


