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Romance Created on 12-29-07 Views(387) Story Rating G

“Lauren…Lauren can you hear me?” The voice invaded her head

“Yes…” She whispered.

“Can you open your eyes for me dear?” Lauren tried to force her eyes open but white was all she could see “I…I can’t.”

“Yes you can dear…just try” Lauren tried again but there was still no progress, then there was another voice “Lauren, it’s me. Honey can you open your eyes for me?” That was the voice from before, that voice that sounded Oh so familiar to her yet she couldn’t put a face of a name to the person. Lauren’s eyes opened enough to see her surrounds, White…Everything was white. Her eyes stung from the brightness of the wretched colour but she forced them open once again. There was a small table beside her bed and a white sheet was drawn around the little cubicle and people, there were lots of people. But only one face stood out to Lauren. A woman in her mid thirties stood at the end of her bed. Long black hair cascaded around her pale face and piercing blue eyes stared down at her, if this wasn’t heaven and she wasn’t an angel, Lauren didn’t know what was. The woman smiled down at her and she smiled back “There we go my dear, isn’t it so much better to have your eyes open and being able to see the beauty of this world? Come on now, your doing well, your going to be alright”

“Lauren? Are you alright?” A young blonde nurse stood at her side with a puzzled look on her face “No…I’m not alright. Where am I?”

“Well your in the hospital sweetheart” Her mother and father were at her side squeezing her hand “You had a black out” Lauren looked at her confused

“I had a what?” The nurse beside her answer her question before her mother got the chance “A Blackout…Often called fainting. Your teacher tells us you fell from your chair screaming in pain…Can you tell me where the pain was?” Lauren searched her memories for the moment prior to her fainting, but all she could remember was that sweet voice and those intense blue eyes. “I can’t remember…But I do remember a woman. There was a woman in the car with me, who was it?” Her mother walked back to her side

“Dear there was no woman, Jake bought you here in his car”

“Jake?” Lauren tried to sit up “Jake bought me here” Her mother nodded. A small path cleared to the door and he walked in “Hey there stranger” he said in a soft tone “How ya holding up?”

“Jake…” She sat up slowly in the bed and held out her arms to him. He walked over and grabbed her “Oh baby you scared me so much” A tear ran down her cheek “I thought I’d lost you” He whispered to her.

“Thank you, Jake” He held her for nearly 5 minutes before breaking away from her hold.

“Honey…” Her mum and dad came back to her side “There’s something the doctor has to tell you” Lauren’s face dropped and she almost cried but the woman at the end of the bed appeared again, her hair was flowing over her face but her words were clear as she spoke “Oh my dear, there is nothing wrong with you. Your going to be alright…I promise” She smiled at the beautiful woman and turned her attention to the doctor on her right “Doctor…what exactly is wrong with me? Why did I black out?”

 The Doctor let out a sigh but put on a warm smile “There is nothing wrong, you just suffer of a major case of migraines. You fainted because it was your body’s way of dealing with the pain” Lauren let out a sigh of relief.

“We’re going to give you some antibiotics but you’re only to take them when the pain gets really bad. Okay?” Lauren nodded. “Ok well then you guys are right to take her home, Just come to the front desk and I’ll give you the release forms to sign and then she can go” Her parents followed to doctor out to the main desk and Jake followed “I’ll wait outside while you get dressed” Lauren waved him goodbye and turned back to the woman at the end of her bed, the room was completely empty except for her and the blue eyed beauty. “Now didn’t I tell you everything was going to be fine” She smiled at the woman “Yes you did. Thank you… if it wasn’t for you I probably never would have opened my eyes”

“No dear, you would have opened them…but not for a little while”

“Still, I owe you thanks”

“Oh my dear, you owe me nothing, just your love and belief that I am here…” Her voice trailed off when her mother walked in the door “Who were you talking to honey?” She asked slightly puzzled, Lauren just smiled and replied “Oh no one…”

 

 

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On March 11th 2008 raindrpsonrses Said :
raindrpsonrses I bet you the woman that she's seeing is her mom. =]] kmp! i love this story. You should get it published. =]]
On February 7th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster hee hee, she going cwazy
On January 22nd 2008 frankiepinedo Said :
frankiepinedo KMP!
On January 7th 2008 punkdancr Said :
punkdancr very good! keep me posted please!
On January 7th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz keep me posted! i love itt.
On January 6th 2008 lovelynatwolff Said :
lovelynatwolff I LOVE IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH! KMP!
On January 1st 2008 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 omg that was really good...keep me posted plz...
On January 1st 2008 crzygrl427 Said :
my picture
really good. can't wait for the next part. =) please keep me posted
On December 31st 2007 Melanie82092 Said :
Melanie82092 wow..... that almost made me cry lol so will you plz keep me posted on this story next time thanks!
On December 31st 2007 HipsterHanna Said :
HipsterHanna Um, an angel? That's cool. :D Or her real mother...hmmmm!! Intense. haha. Very well done. :D
On December 30th 2007 cheerleader725 Said :
cheerleader725 keep me posted! please!
On December 30th 2007 atavanhalen Said :
atavanhalen hmmm... i bet it is her biological mother...
On December 30th 2007 Angel4eva007 Said :
Angel4eva007 Ahhh you will have to wait for the next part too see who it is. You will all be amazed and maybe even shocked Lol...Thanks 4 leaving ur comments
On December 30th 2007 KimSmallwood Said :
KimSmallwood is it like an angel or something?? keep me posted! =]
On December 29th 2007 BunnyBoy12365 Said :
BunnyBoy12365 keep me posted please
On December 29th 2007 tece26 Said :
tece26 Great! Is the woman her real mother? Ohhh keep me posted please
On December 29th 2007 Doublecheck Said :
Doublecheck Omg! Who is that woman????? And what's the boys name??? So many questions. This is becoming very very very good. Keep going!!
On December 29th 2007 Patriciaxox Said :
Patriciaxox kmp.