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Romance Created on 12-29-07 Views(384) Story Rating G

“Welcome, Come in and take a seat please. There’s one at the back beside Miss Barker” The boy walked in like he owned the place. There was no sign of a smile or any sort of enjoyment of the current moment on his face, but even Lauren could see that he was enjoying how uncomfortable he made her. He pulled out the seat beside her and the noise it made made her cringe. Her head rang and her ears pounded but it wasn’t enough for her to show him how weak he made her. Lauren straightened up in her chair and faced the teacher trying to look like she was listening. Out of the corner of her eye she could see him sitting there just watching her. She turned to him “Do you have a problem?”

He looked down at his hands and at his desk, He patted his pocket and checked his bag “Yeah I do actually, I forgot my pencil” Lauren scowled at him and mouthed the words “ass” at him. And grinned a little and mouthed back “Bitch” Lauren could have jumped out of her seat but a sudden dizziness came over her and she grabbed her head “What did you forget to take that aspirin like I told you?” Lauren slightly shook her head causing a massive pain run down her head into her neck. She screamed out in pain and fell out of her chair onto the floor clutching her head. Her eyes started to shut but she forced them open, within a matter of seconds the teacher was at her side with his hands on her shoulders “Just breathe Lauren we’ve got the nurse on her way now. We don’t want to move you just incase we hurt you more” She tried to thank him but the sharp pain came again shooting down her spine “GOD!” She screamed.

“Here get out of the way, She needs a doctor not a school nurse” She felt arms and then…Nothing. She felt weightless, almost like she was floating on air. But then reality crashed down around her when the pain shot through every inch of her skull. “WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH ME!!!”

“Just hold on we’re nearly at the hospital”. That voice. Lauren knew that voice, but who? She just couldn’t put her finger on that familiar voice, then darkness again.

When she woke her head felt like it was no longer connected to her body. She opened her eyes to see white, was she dead? Was this heaven?

 

 

Sorry i keep cutting these so short but i just LOVE cliffhangers...Can u tell? Lol

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On March 11th 2008 raindrpsonrses Said :
raindrpsonrses i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kmp!
On January 10th 2008 frankiepinedo Said :
frankiepinedo omgmgg omgomgomgomgomg i hope u get published this is soooo adorable and like amazing lol
On December 30th 2007 Angel4eva007 Said :
Angel4eva007 THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! It means sooo much to me we people leave good comments.
On December 29th 2007 Doublecheck Said :
Doublecheck My God, this story is freaking awesome! Better than anything I've read in such a long time. Keep going!!! Brilliant details!
On December 29th 2007 lvm3932 Said :
lvm3932 i fucking love this story lol ......
On December 29th 2007 lvm3932 Said :
lvm3932 i fucking love this story lol ......
On December 29th 2007 appleanne6192 Said :
appleanne6192 OMG! i love it! pleas keep me posted
On December 29th 2007 babydoll6789 Said :
babydoll6789 lol they are so cute..i hope she gets with the guy next door!..keep me posted!
On December 29th 2007 HipsterHanna Said :
HipsterHanna so, i am really enjoying this story. you're doing a wonderful job. i would enjoy being informed when you come out with new segments. so please, keep me posted. thank you!
On December 29th 2007 gotmilk1994 Said :
gotmilk1994 i luv it! keep me posted!!!
On December 29th 2007 Melanie82092 Said :
Melanie82092 Hey I really LOVE LOVE LOVE this story please keep me posted on it!
On December 29th 2007 necrosiss Said :
necrosiss Roflmao I choked on my breakfast when I read TheBranster's comment. Indeed. It would have been fun.
On December 29th 2007 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster it would be fun to see her in heaven, dancing with Jesus, having a cocktail with dead people.
On December 29th 2007 jennaferz Said :
jennaferz its ahhhdorablee. =]]
On December 29th 2007 Patriciaxox Said :
Patriciaxox this is cuuute. but i dont like chliffhangers. u have to wait and i dont like to wait ;p kmp.
On December 29th 2007 katelyncares Said :
katelyncares i like this story, keep me posted. nd chek out mi story if u have time.
On December 29th 2007 tece26 Said :
tece26 hehehe I love how they fight. fun fun fun...