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The Boy who lived Next Door (3)
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“Hide me….Quick!” Chris nearly ran in a circle after Lauren, who was down on all fours crawling behind the counter. She popped her head up “You can server him, and don’t be afraid to get nasty with him”
“Lauren what the hell is go…Oh I sir, how may I help you?”
“Umm I’m looking for Lauren Brookes. On her way to WORK this morning she dropped this” The boy handed over a leather bound book
“Umm thanks, I’ll give it to her when she gets up”
The boy looked at her confused “Gets up?”
“Oh umm…gets back” She smiled innocently, the boy just turned on his heels and left. Lauren sighed and pulled herself up off the ground, “Now what was all that about?” Chris looked at her suspiciously. “THAT was the asshole that called me a bitch this morning”
“Oh you mean that’s your new neighbor?” Lauren nodded “Can I come stay at your place tonight Lauren?” Chris gave her a cheeky grin.
“Oh my god, How could you. You know you shouldn’t date outside your species” Chris laughed
“Oh but he’s so cute…and he looks dangerous” She eyed the door where the boy had walked out. “Yes he DOES look dangerous. That’s the reason why I have to protect you, you can’t stay at my place tonight” She said trying to put drama into her voice, she put her hand on her best friends shoulder “It’s for your own good” Both girls laughed until yet another customer walked into the shop.
By the end of the day, all of Lauren’s energy had been drained and she was ready to fall out of her seat “Lauren would you like me to walk you home?”
“Thanks but no thanks Chris; I just need some time to myself. Walking home might calm me down enough for me to sleep tonight” Lauren hugged the tall girl and shut the doors to the Boutique behind her. Actually the last thing she wanted was to be walking home in the dark on her own, but she really did need time too cool off. When she stepped outside the doors of the mall the cool autumn breeze hit her and she pulled her light coat a little tighter. It wasn’t that far to her house, maybe 5 or 6 blocks. But in Sydney, 5 or 6 blocks could mean about a half an hours walk, still she didn’t care she like the peace and solitude that the night bought with it. The stars were exceptionally bright tonight, for there was no moon. Somewhere up there her real parents were looking down on her, yes that’s right, Lauren was adopted. She was one of the lucky ones that went to a good home that had enough money to support her. She still called James and Karen, mum and dad but somewhere in that big bundle of stars her real mum and dad were looking down at her, proud that there daughter wasn’t taking advantage of her adoptive parent’s money. The breeze blew again, but it wasn’t the cold that sent a shiver up her spine. You know that feeling you get when you think your being watch, how every strand of hair on the back of your neck stands up and your heart begins to race for no particular reason, well right now Lauren’s heart was pounding faster than the speed of light. Every sound made her jump or squeal. She could see the lights on her house now, and she could see the Boy next door in his bedroom window on the second floor of there house. Lauren stopped this time, she could have sworn she heard footsteps…there it was again. Was that the sound of a belt being pulled form a pair of jeans, ready to lock around the throat of some stupid girl that turned down her friends offer of walking her home. The bush beside her move and she let out a small moan, slowly…very slowly she turned around, But the only sound that came from her mouth was “OH…”
HAHA What do you think...Another cliffhanger. Votes and comments please.
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| On March 11th 2008 raindrpsonrses Said : | |
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i can't wait to see what happens next! =]] |
| On December 29th 2007 Doublecheck Said : | |
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Grr..what happened??!?!?! |
| On December 29th 2007 TheBranster Said : | |
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lol, "OH NOES". ngreat chapter |
| On December 8th 2007 Khmerfriendz Said : | |
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omyg |
| On December 6th 2007 greenrfwriter Said : | |
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Sweetness! |
| On December 6th 2007 ALIYAH1994 Said : | |
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KoOl |
| On December 6th 2007 beachparty57 Said : | |
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ohhhh whoo is it?!/!?! |
| On December 6th 2007 Angel4eva007 Said : | |
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Lol don't ya just luv cliffhangers. I'm not gonna leave it there. I'll write another one tonight. |
| On December 6th 2007 lauraloohooo Said : | |
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wow.... keep me posted for #4! |
| On December 6th 2007 tece26 Said : | |
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AAHH!!!! Wait what happened! OMG! Your leaving it there?? Write more now! |
| On December 5th 2007 blahhhx3323 Said : | |
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ahh please write one more tonite ! |
| On December 5th 2007 blahhhx3323 Said : | |
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ahh please write one more tonite ! |
| On December 5th 2007 loveXafterXall Said : | |
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:O I love it so much! Please write just one more tonight!! |


