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Vampires Forever and Always (Part 1)

Tragedy Created on 7-27-08 Views(825) Story Rating G

            Your name is Sheba, your 18; you have honey brown hair down to the small of your back, grey eyes and a tattoo on your lower back, a fallen angel with the name "Logan" in script under it. You have a younger sister she is 10 years old her name Lisa, she has blonde hair resting on her shoulders and brown eyes. You have lived in a grave for the past 3 weeks since you lost your parents and brother. Your lover, Logan, disappeared after a tornado and his parents said they found the body.

 

            It was almost midnight on a cold lazy and quite cloudy late December night. You and your sister were walking among the gravestones, some new and some old you both loved the way they looked with a fine layer of frost.

You tell your sister, "It might snow tonight." trying to make a conversation.

Your sister replies with, "It’s too cold, I wish there was a way where we can wear little clothes in the middle of winter and still be warm."

You reply, "I know what you mean I wish that too."

You look up towards the sky trying to see if you can find a star.

Lisa asks, "What are you thinking about?"

"Lisa I’m thinking about a lot of things that you wouldn’t understand."

"Well Sheba I could try to understand if you at least let me know"

"Ok I'll tell you... I’m thinking about Logan and how I miss him so much.” You start to tear up a little. “And how I’m going to get you some food to eat and keep you warm through the night."

           

            As soon as you finish you are at the tomb where you and your sister slept for the past 3 weeks. You give your sister the last of the food that you had stashed away from any wandering animals and sit next to her as she lies down to go to sleep covering her with covers you found after the tornado along with a pillow. You sing her a song that puts her to sleep and wait there for a while to make sure she really was asleep. Locking the gate to the tomb, you go out to wander around the graveyard. While wandering you heard some voices, your curiosity wanting to check it out you walk toward the voices until you can see guys that look like your brothers punk ass friends. They were Davis, Kevin, Vince, and Sean. You hide behind a tree and listen to what they are saying.


Davis: “Kevin are you sure you saw them walking around here?"
Kevin: “Ya I am sure it was her.”
Vince: “Well where did they go?”
Sean: “Why don’t you just leave them alone?”
Davis: “Because I need my pay back to what she did to me.”
Sean: “What did she do?”
Davis: “I was talking to her saying that her and her sister could stay at my house since their home was destroyed by the tornado. She told me to fuck off then tried to slap me. So I grabbed her hand, and she kneed me in the balls.”
Sean: “That is it?”
You were thinking That is not true he tried to rape me last time I saw him.
Kevin: “Hey, what is that?”

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On January 11th 2009 blackangel123 Said: 
blackangel123 interesting
On September 19th 2008 ridinbitch0807 Said: 
ridinbitch0807 very interesting. love it :)
On September 17th 2008 1toughcookie Said: 
1toughcookie interesting, I dont like first person much, but i like somethng new, every once in a while. :)
On August 20th 2008 lonchaney4ever Said: 
lonchaney4ever Hey this is good so far i havent read many stories written like this but i'll give this one a try
On August 11th 2008 valiantvivian Said: 
valiantvivian I like the direction it's going but as for the first person angle it's weird. You don't see to many of these. Please kmp it's a nice change from the norm.
On August 8th 2008 Griffin2400 Said: 
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THIS IS REALLY GOOD!
On August 6th 2008 Baillie010 Said: 
Baillie010 ooo...i like it...kmp!
On August 5th 2008 LunaHail Said: 
LunaHail please KMP!
On August 5th 2008 Artemisseven Said: 
Artemisseven Love it. KMP.
On August 4th 2008 JWalker2406 Said: 
JWalker2406 Pretty good :) As others have pointed out, a few grammar/spelling mistakes. But those can be easily fixed. In my opinion I don't like too much talking and not enough detail to balance it out if you know what I mean... Basically a little more detail so it won't look like the story is basically people talking :) Good start though! kmp
On August 2nd 2008 luvhim4ever12 Said: 
luvhim4ever12 wow keep me posted i want to know more!! plllzzz
On August 2nd 2008 gothlvr98 Said: 
gothlvr98 I loved it! BUt make sure you get the grammar right. Nothing major but sometimes you meant to say you're but you wrote your.
On August 2nd 2008 765433 Said: 
765433 gasp* nice!!
On August 1st 2008 brittvanesa69 Said: 
brittvanesa69 kmp love it so much
On July 27th 2008 MillieMarie13 Said: 
MillieMarie13 LOVE IT kmp
On July 27th 2008 tiffany1058 Said: 
tiffany1058 KMP
On July 27th 2008 HipsterHanna Said: 
HipsterHanna this was really good. Watch the grammar and spelling, though. Your does not equal you're.
On July 27th 2008 LightxThexFuze Said: 
LightxThexFuze Very good can't wait to read more
On July 27th 2008 jabip15 Said: 
jabip15 this is good! I like it :)
On July 27th 2008 helen1789 Said: 
helen1789 this is good :D
On July 27th 2008 analyssarenae Said: 
analyssarenae wow. i like thiss
On July 27th 2008 SiErRaLuNa Said: 
SiErRaLuNa i like it...kmp plz