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Aleera (part 5)
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 Created on 6-4-07
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Antonio sighed and sat down next to Aleera, she moved away, she really hated being boxed in or cramped.
"May I see the sapphire?" Antonio inquired, Aleera carefully handed it over... after a couple of seconds of him staring at the gem he began to murmur "these inscriptions... they" Aleera glared at him "you know what they mean then?" she urged, he looked up and his face went blank "no... I just, thought I had" he stuttered un-surely. Aleera was still very suspicious of her brother. He got up off her bed and went to see their father.
As he entered the largest room in the house which happened to be their fathers sleeping chamber he heard a sickly voice whisper "How is Aleera?" Antonio was unsure how his father knew that he had just visited Aleera but he always seemed to know this sort of thing, he always seemed to know what people thought.
"She is ok... but have you noticed how she has changed recently?" His father took a minute to respond " Can you not expect a change in one after the death of another in relation?" Antonio knew this was a rhetorical question but still he gave a reply "Of coarse you can but in my opinion the change my sister has gone through is the change of one who has lost a part of themselves." With a smile the astute father replied
"If you loose your mother is it not like losing a part of yourself?"
It was common for Antonio to try and outwit his father but he never succeeded, it would always happen the other way round.
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Please Login to post comments| On June 5th 2007 sexyqtpie Said : | |
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I really like it. I wish tehre was more:) write more soon:) |
| On June 5th 2007 LokiSeto Said : | |
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She sleeps in a tiny room an dyet when someone SITS next to her she feels cramped? There's a better wording for that. Period after "inquired". No "..." unless it's someone talking. "..." after "they". "you know what they mean then?" should be changed to "Do you know what they mean?". Period after "urged". Ok so he stoof up to walk out of the room first right? How did she look as he left? I like the witty banter at the end. |
| On June 4th 2007 Aleera00 Said : | |
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Please let me know what you think of it. |
