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Pandemonium
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 Created on 4-28-08
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Elienna sat cradling her knees in the corner of the room. The light from the open window stretched wide, almost touching her toes. She panicked as she hid from this growing ray of sunlight.
Elienna had no coffin to sleep in and she was too naive to know, she was not the same as her sister, not the same as the one’s who stalked the night. Not a vampire. Elienna’s disturbingly pale skin and frightening red eyes caused the sun to hurt her but she was no vampire.
Long, white hair covered a once beautiful but now distorted face and tears streamed down her cheeks.
Pandemonium broke out in her mind. From this point she was insane.
Everyday she hides from the sun. Every night she hides from the moon. Soon she will fade to nothing.
Please let me know what you think and tell me if I should expand it into full story that will explain it further. Also any helpful criticism or comments welcomed.
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Please Login to post comments| On September 8th 2008 princezz000 Said : | |
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kathryn if you spent as much time doing your home work as you did writing stories then youd be a grade A student
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| On July 2nd 2008 spymaster1026 Said : | |
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it doesn't make much sense to me but im sure if you go deeper it will make more sense |
| On May 24th 2008 Aleera00 Said : | |
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Thx pplz. I probably will when I get the time to. |
| On May 22nd 2008 PlayMoreWii Said : | |
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You don't say something like that and NOT expand upon it. I say go for it. |
| On May 5th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Mmmm you have me intreged |
