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The Screams of the Night (PART 6)
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-"What?!" - said Jake and ran towards were Christie was pointing.
What Jake saw would stay with him 'till de die he died. Between two trees laid the body of the blonde girl he had known as Rachel. Her body was in a strange position, the legs and arms pointed in weird directions. Her head and back arched looking up. Her stomach wasn't there. A hole punctured what used to be Rachel's belly. Her body was ripped and slashed from head to toes. Rachel's eyes looked to the stars and her mouth showed pain and horror.
Jake turned around and vomited. The smell of the blood kept him retching until Will came.
-"Christie said she didn't want to see her again... You okay, man?"
-"No...don't look back." - but almost as Jake said it, Will's curiosity got the best of him. He looked back.
-"HOLY SHIT! WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED TO HER!? SHIT!!" - yelled Will. -"I'm getting the f*ck out of here!"
Will began running. Jake ran behind him, while getting his cell phone out of his pocket. He dialed 911 as fast as he could.
-"Good evening. What is your emergency?" -asked a female operator.
-"Another murder! I was camping with my friends at the cliffs. One of the girls got separated, and when we found her she was dead...Oh, God!" - Jake stopped running and puked again. -"Hello? Are you still there?"
-"Yes." - answered the operator. - "Where are you?"
-"Cliffs of Ithiel...well, running out of here....I'm going to my friend's house to pick up my baby sister."
-"Do not move from where you are! A police car will be there shortly..."
-"Hell no! I'm not staying for that thing to get me! If the police want to talk to me, they will pick me up at 183 Cruise Street!" - with that he hung up. He kept running until he found the parking lot where he had parked his car. He felt for the keys in his left pocket, found them. He got in and drove. He must have broken every speed law in the state, but he didn't care. In less than ten minutes he was at Johnny's.
He parked in the driveway and got out of the car still running. He didn't knock on the door, he blasted in and found Stephanie on the living room.
-"Jake, you're here!" - she screamed when she saw him.
-"Dude, you okay? You look pale, and you smell like vomit!" - said Johnny
-"Yeah.... Steph, go get me a glass of water."
-"Sure, you guys call me when you're done talking."
Stephanie went into the kitchen and started looking inside the refrigerator. When Jake felt satisfied with the distance between them, he whispered to Johnny:
-"Man, Rachel's dead. I don't know how it happened. Christie saw it, and she panicked. It was a mess...blood everywhere, a hole in her stomach. She was bitten, slashed...it was so horrible..."
-"Dude, you sure?"
-"No, man. I just saw a f*cking girl ripped apart and I'm not sure!" -said Jake pushing Johnny.
-"Wow. That's sick...."
A blue light illuminated the living room and a siren went off. Over a megaphone a strong male voice called:
-"Come out of the house with your hands up."
-"What the hell...?" -said Johnny. He went over to the window and saw that outside two police cars were parked in his front lawn. -"Dude, they got their guns out!"
Something broke in the kitchen and Stephanie came running.
-"What's going on?" - she asked.
-"Let's obey..." -said Jake and put his hand over his head as he went out.
-"To the floor." -yelled a second police officer when they were out. -"Anybody else inside?"
-"No." -answered Johnny as he was searched.
-"We received a very disturbing call tonight. Have you done any prank calls?" -asked the first officer.
-"No. I was the one that called.Did you search the cliffs?"- said Jake
-"A fellow patrolman is doing that as we speak. If they find anything we'll be the first to know." - was the only answer he got.
-"When I saw her it was too late...I..." - Jake couldn't find the words.
-"Jake, what happened?" - asked Stephanie, but her question was answered by a beep on the officers walkie-talkie.
-"Oh, God! It's true. It wasn't a prank...a girl is dead, very dead..." - said a third police man over the walkie-talkie.
-"Holy shit! Get inside the patrol car, the three of you..." -said the first police officer.
Stephanie, Johnny and Jake obeyed. Stephanie was crying and when she sat in the car she asked Jake:
-"Who was it?"
-"Rachel." - nothing else was said in the way to the police station.
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| On January 16th 2008 InvisibleFlame Said : | |
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Don't worry about the typos...we get it...and it's evident you were pouring into the story or else you would have had time to proof it! |
| On July 5th 2007 pinkpanther93 Said : | |
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ooh chilling |
| On July 5th 2007 mrskritter Said : | |
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great work |
| On May 15th 2007 Akinka Said : | |
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Sorry, found another mistake...bad typing, I guess I want to write it all at at once..."What Jake saw would stay with him 'till the day he died."
SORRY! ;) |


