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First Kiss

Romance Created on 11-16-07 Views(184) Story Rating G

Dear Diary,

Today was basically an ordinary day at Brookwood High. People were bullying me about my weight, but what am I to do. I love food. I can't help it. Well anyway, a new guy came into the school today. His name is Xavier King. He has the most beautiful grey eyes. It's hardly that I see HUMANS  with grey eyes. My pet cat, Carly, has grey eyes. I already have a major crush on him. I know, it's too soon, but he's so cute. He's also so sweet. He actually talked to me. That's they first time a boy actually talked to me without critisizing (if that's how you spell it) me on my weight. We talked about school, music, and colors. His favorite color is green. He likes all kinds of music. His favorite rock bands is My Chemical Romance and Panic! at the disco. And his favorite school subject is Literature, which is so totally different from me. I hate literature, my favorite subject is mathematics. Well I have to go, it's 10:00. My mom trips over me writing in my diary and staying up late at night. Well good night.

Love, Aoki

 

 

 

Aoki Samuels is 15 years old. She really doesn't have friends at school. Kids pick on her because she's overweight. She has very beautiful golden brown skin, with big dimples. Her long, brown, and curly hairs falls down her back. Her curves are in the right place (her opinion), but to most people they need work. She's never really had a real boyfriend. One boy just dated her to get her in bet, over a bet. 

She has a younger brother named Mike. He's a skinny little boy. Her mother had a perfect body, and she still wonders where she gets her fat body from. Her father died when she was 7 years old from Lukemia. She misses him so much.

 

 

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On June 29th 2008 UPTmrscarter93 Said :
UPTmrscarter93 I LOVE IT ALREADY AND DIS IS JUST DA INTRO
On December 9th 2007 babydoll6789 Said :
babydoll6789 keep me posted!
On December 3rd 2007 jennaferz Said :
jennaferz awweh. i lovee it. ahaha when you said: "My pet cat, Carly, has grey eyes. I already have a major crush on him.", for a minute i thought you meant the cat. blondeee me. =]] tell you what, i'll rate the rest of them but not comment till the verrrry last one you have up. thennn i'll tell you all about what i think. lovin it so far.
On November 25th 2007 crankdatshit94 Said :
crankdatshit94 i liked it!
On November 17th 2007 WaitingAlone Said :
WaitingAlone awww omg i love it. plz keep me posted
On November 17th 2007 melibeans10 Said :
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On November 16th 2007 loveXafterXall Said :
loveXafterXall I like to...a lot! puh-leeza keep me posted!