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Vampires Can't Fall In Love (14)

Romance Created on 1-14-08 Views(614) Story Rating G

Startled, the drunk man grabbed me by my arms and pulled me up in front of him like a hostage, holding the broken glass at my throat. He was facing the alley where the shadow of a man could be seen.

“Wh-Who are you?” the man stammered. I noticed he was shaking as he spoke. I could probably get away from him if I tried.

“Take your hands off the young lady,” the mystery man spoke again. He had a deep, husky voice. It sounded sort of familiar.

“And what if I don’t?” he said, acting cocky. I knew he was only trying to sound tough.

A slight chuckle echoed throughout the alley.

“Show yourself!” He was angry now.

The mystery man emerged from the shadows of the alley, slowly walking towards us. He had long, silky black hair that stretched down his back. He looked kind of tall, and he was really pale; paler than the moon. He was about fifteen feet away from us when he finally spoke.

“Let her go, now,” he said as he was still walking towards us.

“Or else what?” He held me tighter, almost piercing my skin with the glass.

“Or else this will get very ugly,” he smirked. He was only seven feet away now.

“You think you scare me?” He was trying to sound tough again. “Come any closer and I’ll slice her neck.”

The next thing I saw was a blur coming towards us, and before I could realize what was going on I was on the ground holding myself up with my hands. There was screaming coming from behind me; a man’s screaming. I turned around and the mystery guy was sucking at the drunk’s neck. The glass was on the ground lying beside me. I thought about picking it up when suddenly I remembered who that man was.

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*IMPORTANT NOTICE*

 

To all my wonderful fans who have supported me with this story im sorry, but I will no longer be posting “Vampires Can’t Fall In Love.” I’m working really hard right now trying to finish my story “Which Side Are You On” so I can get it published (hopefully) and its really hard for me to work on 2 stories at the same time when im trying to be completely focused on “WSAYO” its also hard to find time to write both of them b/c of school. =( im really sorry guys. I will still continue to write it when I do have time and also im changing it. Im rewriting everything ive got written so far, mainly the beginning so it wont be so jumbled together and confuse ppl so much. And I also want to change the parts that just seem too weird, its not what I wanted. And the story doesn’t seem to make sense either. Anyway, the whole thing just doesn’t sound the way I want it to so I will be rewriting all of it and when I do ill start posting it again. Until then im sorry…I really loved all ur comments and rates. Ur support was really awesome! XD and to any of you who still want me to keep you updated when I start posting again, plz send me a msg or a comment on MY page, not on this page. K? and thx again. Also sorry for all my rambling lol =D

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On July 2nd 2008 cvncvbn Said :
cvncvbn i loved all the stories u did on this one man i do hope u make more if u do keep me posted for a new one k n thanks
On June 4th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess awwwww im kinda sad..... but can you keep me posted for the new one?
On May 25th 2008 b33cool Said :
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when the new ver. comes out kmp kk xxxooo ps b33cool!!1
On May 20th 2008 punkgurl989 Said :
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aaawwww this story is sssooo good !! XD when you start writing this again please KMP !!
On April 6th 2008 TLee14 Said :
TLee14 awwww! this is a really good story!! when you write it again, keep me posted!
On April 3rd 2008 shorteyjr Said :
shorteyjr i cant wait for u to finish wsayo kmp
On March 26th 2008 JessyMary Said :
JessyMary aww... this storie is good =) can you kmp wen u start writing it again?!
On March 21st 2008 sadowski89 Said :
sadowski89 awww im so sad now!! i love this story!! i hope u again soon!!!! kmp plz!!
On March 3rd 2008 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 ok! it was a good story though! Good luck! I hope you do publish your other story!!
On February 23rd 2008 username685 Said :
username685 agh well you better get wsayo finished cause i wanna know what happens
On February 14th 2008 CRISSY10012 Said :
CRISSY10012 kmp if you do write somthing again on this one
On February 5th 2008 muffinbobeat48 Said :
muffinbobeat48 WOW. Writing improved about a thousandfold from part 4 to part 14. Label me VERY impressed.
On January 25th 2008 DaKay Said :
DaKay Alright =]
On January 16th 2008 tkotapout Said :
tkotapout I am SO off to mesaage you right now!!!!Good luck with WSAYO and yeah....
On January 15th 2008 groupielove Said :
groupielove This is an enjoyable story. Good luck on the other one and please keep me posted on this one. Thanks
On January 15th 2008 RockerGirl16 Said :
RockerGirl16 kool! good luck on publishing your other story!!!
On January 14th 2008 rain2teardrops Said :
rain2teardrops thats so awsome! Good luck with your other story, but I can't wait to see what you have with the new VCFIL. Keep informed on how it goes plz.
On January 14th 2008 KimSmallwood Said :
KimSmallwood yay! whens the new wsayo coming out? i love it! keep me posted =]
On January 14th 2008 Rachel908642 Said :
Rachel908642 I am so happy you are focusing on WSAYO
On January 14th 2008 Redneck151 Said :
Redneck151 hey good for you for trying to get it published and i really like this story so i hope you finish writing it when you get the other one published and good luck
On January 14th 2008 angelofpurity5 Said :
angelofpurity5 this is great keep me posted
On January 14th 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 ooo so good!! keep me posted please! *J*