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Vampires Can't Fall In Love (6)
"No...I sense something, but I don't know how. Do you feel it?" Nel says, getting worried.
"The only thing I feel right now is annoyed. Now shut the hell up!"
"Watch out!" I saw a fireball shoot from behind him so I junped on him, pushing him down to the floor. What an awkward position. But why couldn't he see it? The fireball hit his T.V causing it to explode and start a fire.
"What the hell was that? An invisable fireball?! How did...nevermind. We need to get out. Come on!"
"Aaaaaaahh! There's another! Duck!" This one hit the couch which was beside us. Doing this the couch hit me, knocking me into the fire. "Aaaaaahh! Ow!" I scream in pain.
"Holy shit! What the hell is going on?! I need to get out!"
"Please...help me..vamp...he..help.."
"Where are you?"
"The couch...under..ow..help.."
"Gotcha! He used his psycic vampire ability to move the couch, then grabbed a hold of me and teleported somewhere. "Are you alright?" He asked and layed me down gently on a soft cozy bed.
(cough, cough) I started coughing up blood, and lots of it. I'm surprised he didn't drink it, there was so much.
"Shit. Are you alright? Can you breathe? Talk? Say something!"
"I..(cough, cough, cough)..I.." (cough, cough, cough) I tried to speak, but only coughed up more blood.
"Just breathe. Don't talk. You can talk later. Breathe. You'll be alright, Nel."
He said my name. I smiled, (cough) "Thank you...(cough, cough)...but..I don't-" (cough, cough)
"Sshhh...It's alright. Don't talk. You need rest."
"No, I won't ma- (cough) make it." (cough, cough)
"Of course you will. You can do it. You can make it."
"You only want (cough, cough) answers."
"Sure, that mat be it, but you gotta live."
"Live? (cough) Why live? I...have no (cough) place in this...world."
"Sure you don't. Nel, just get some rest. We'll talk in the morning."
"Vamp..thank you..for being here (cough, cough) with me..so I..won't (cough) die alone."
"Don't be silly. You aren't dying yet."
He embraced me in his arms and kept telling me to rest and that I'd be alright. As I listened to him talk and try to comfort me I fell asleep, dreaming again.
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| On June 21st 2008 anbo123 Said : | |
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*sniffs* That is so cute |
| On June 4th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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hahaha i cant help but laugh because he acts like he doesnt like her at all then turns all soft *sweet* |
| On November 21st 2007 KimSmallwood Said : | |
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if he didn't like her, then he wouldn't care, he likes her though! [awww] |
| On November 15th 2007 dreamer2495 Said : | |
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oh,and they don't throw fire balls
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| On November 15th 2007 dreamer2495 Said : | |
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this is so ametuer, it sucks, pyschic ability, teleporting? omg, you don't know anything about vampires, such as each has a name, not just vamp, second vampires are just like humans except they don't eat, they can be in sunlight but not for long,they drink blood to survive not because of anything else, vampires are sexy, poetic, and romantic. they do NOT have pyshic abilities or anything like that, even though they are a myth you need to do some magor research. watch vampire shows on tv, by a couple actual books that mention them and until don't write anymore vampire storys, they suck. |
| On July 18th 2007 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said : | |
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Wow! I really like it...I just read this from 1 to 6? I wanna to know what happened to next!! So post me when ya got other!! |
| On July 17th 2007 Byrnesrebel Said : | |
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awesome. |
| On July 17th 2007 jirrith2007 Said : | |
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Very cute, but I dont want her to die. This was short too, but keep it up! |
| On July 17th 2007 rockprincess31 Said : | |
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That was so cute! But what's with the fireballs? Awesome job. Keep me posted! |
| On July 17th 2007 MandyJo110 Said : | |
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its good! keep me posted please |
| On July 17th 2007 grassfairy02 Said : | |
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awsome. keep me posted!!! |
| On July 17th 2007 starryboo Said : | |
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I really like this!!! |
| On July 17th 2007 Baillie010 Said : | |
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awwwww Ilove it!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On July 17th 2007 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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Awesome! Very unusual story. I love it. |
| On July 17th 2007 7unicornrings Said : | |
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