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Behind The Doors - Part 1 - HORROR!

Horror Created on 6-26-08 Views(51) Story Rating G

"Creeek!" Went the door as the thing slowly opened the door I was asleep I didn't know what was going to happen then all of a sudden I felt sore, sore all over then I was paralyzed by this pain in my brain the thing whatever it was, was draining my life, "Ahhhhhh!" I screamed as I flung up straight sitting on my bed, It was all a dream, I thought but that was before I spotted that the wardrobe cupboard was open. I heard footsteps coming closer and I saw a great big shadow I wiped my eyes, It was too late the thing came in too quick for me to indenify it, then it was pitch black.

It was 6:59 in the morning two hours after when I woke up, then all of a sudden there was this loud ring "Rinnnnnnngg!!!" My clock screamed as it ticked to 7:00 in the morning "WHOLY SH**!" I screamed as I hopped out of bed tapped the alarm and rushed out of my bedroom and into the bathroom I locked the door, I was alone and safe or was I? I stripped naked cautiously and looked around the bathroom and shower before I hopped into the shower to make sure it was safe, Then I hopped in and turned the water on then I screamed "HOT HOT HOT!" I turned some of the hot water off, "TOOO COLD COLD COLD!" I screamed then I just tapped the hot water a bit then it was in the middle.

I got the soap bar but examined it, the bar of soap had some green and red on it. I was feeling really scared. I hopped out of the shower and turned off the water then all of sudden I felt a tingle up my spine I shuddered, "Hellooo meat!" The thing behind me laughed, "Come and find me!" It added on as the shadow dissapeared...

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