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As I lie freezing to death
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 Created on 4-22-07
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Austin and i are dating we have alot of time together and after he broke up with that slut Lyndsay. she commited suicide on herself. Well here's my story. One night Austin and i were on a date and we had supper in a resturant named Le' Roman'ce and we were staring into each others eyes because we could communicate sycopedithaly.
when we step out of the building there was a car following us and as soon as we reach our car a man steps out and hit us both over the head with a baseball bat. He takes my body and ties it up in ropes and he duck tapes my mouth. Then we are off on the road and i'm in the trunk.
When Austin wakes up in about 10min. he finds a note in the car stating: You will get her back if you deliver 10,000,000,000,000,000dollars to us by next Tuesday. And if you fail your girlfriend i believe her name is Aundrea will suffer the paying of dieing.
When i wake up i try to reach my cell phone which is in my purse but the purse i on the shelf in the next room because i'm right in front of it.And i am all god i am in my new Fator Vatolly dress and i can't afford to fight in it because well i am a top spy of the C.I.A.. Then i remembered that i had a botton on my bracelet that would take anything i wore and shrink it and take it off and maximise my spy outfit and putit on me. So it did that and i took my lazer and undid the ropes and took offthe duck tape.
I went to the next room and one ofthe guy werein there and he spotted me and i didn't even know he was in there. So he took away all of my weapons exceptfor the bracelet and i put on my Fator Vatolly and i couldn't escape.
Was Monday of the next week and Austinonly had a half of the money. Plus it was 10pm at night and the guys were starting to take me down stairs where it was freezing below 0 degreese. The guys tied me down on a blanket and took a knife to my arm and put a deep cut into it. Then they left me and wentup stairs.
The guys came to Austin's house at 10pm and said,'Do you have the money or not.' And Austin said,'No. I don't have the money.' So the men took him to see me. When they got there they said she's down in the basement probably already dead.
Austin rushed down to see what had become of me. And while he was doen there the kindnappers already left and took the money with them. Austin sat down there and held me head in his hands and said why why why why whyyyyyyyyyyy! And laid his head down on my chest. And then he felt one beat then two then three four and five beats and he said she's still alive! So he took me out of the house and in to the hospital.
He acciedentally pressed the botton on my bracelet and my close swiched. Then he said what the heck and then my bodies frozenness took a tempfrom my bracelet and my body flew off.
Austin chased my body in the car allthe way to the CIA HQ until he reached the gateand couldn't get in.
In the HQ my body was fixed after a long coma and i returened home with austin. Also he still asked why iwent to the CIA.
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Please Login to post comments| On April 24th 2007 dureall Said : | |
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Wow thats alot of money. I found it to be entertaining to say the least. |
| On April 22nd 2007 onaipwolf Said : | |
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It rambles on a bit, and it's not very believable. You have a little bit of potential, however. |
| On April 22nd 2007 1184 Said : | |
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i hope you enjoyed it
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