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Created: 07/23 04:48 pm
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|When Things Go Right|
Fourteen-year-old Jaquelyn Michaels could easily be classified as the most innocent girl in her grade-- maybe even her town! She's never done anything slightly illegal, bad, or a tad bit immoral. Honestly, there's no easy way that she could, with her strict, perfectionist father watching her each and every move. In short, Jackie Michaels has been considered the perfect little goody-goody her entire life, but this year, she starts highschool. This year, will be a fresh start, and Jackie's best friend Tess is determined to help Jackie live life to the fullest and experience everything a teenager should. But what happens when Jackie goes too far, and gets an 'experience' far too out of her age level? In just a short few minutes, Jackie's 'goodie' reputation is scortched, and she must hide the burden of a terrible secret from her peers. However, as we all know, secrets don't stay secrets forever. How long can Jackie keep hers?
It's only the 2nd chapter and I feel like ppl are losing interest. So I wanted my readers, as well as ppl not familiar with my story, to get a highlight of what exactly this story is about. Yes, someone gets pregant in this story. But keep in mind, this isn't another one of "those stories". I have such good, fresh, original ideas for this story, and I think it could amount to something very good that a lot of ppl would really like. The prologue and Chapter One got over 50+ points, bt chapter two only got 37. If you haven't seen it yet, go check Chapter 2 out. If you haven't seen the storyy yet, go check it out. If you've read Chapter 2 and/or commented it BUT DIDN'T RATE IT, please, rate it, bcuz it's the right thing to do. I work hard on my stories, and I expect something in return from my fans if they want more. Thank you.
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