well k... humm sorry???? just trying to write and get my work out there sorry u dont like it though and the only reason i do it on here is so people dont know who did it so if ur thinking im just doing it to be popular well i dont if u want to know in all honest it makes me feel good some people drink other smoke i write poety it just gets me though the day sorry u dont like it though
you know. honestly....I was waiting for something youve done to stir me....I just don't see it. I didn't want to say anything with the hope that I was wrong....but it just doesn't happen. when I read your work....I don't sense any genuine emotion. It feels like Im eating candy. Sure it seems nice but my teeth are rotting away the whole time.