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Created: 02/07 06:06 am

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Let's Build A Poem TOGETHER L@@K

O.K. Here is how this works. I just posted the first line of the poem that we are about to create together on my page called “Let’s Build a Poem Together” , and each day after I will read your suggestions of the next line in the poem and select a winner. (Please make your suggestions there and not here) Then I will delete and repost with the next line in place and keep a record at the bottom of who made the winning submission. I haven’t seen this done before and I think it will be fun to see what WE can come up with together. If you see someone’s suggestion that you think is best, feel free to let me know when you comment as me and my team of experts will take that into consideration. BTW My team of experts are Me, Myself, and I and my two dogs Maggie and Data. J HAVE FUN and Please play along. When the poem seems finished, I will take suggestions for titles and post it in it’s completed form with all lines being accredited to the winning submitters. Here’s the first line to build from… It was a dark and dreary Sunday morning Line 1 - seekerovtruth


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At 06:54 pm kmk5487 Said :
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im not that good at poems but that was my reply ... below this any way go look at my poems for ideas plz and thanks vote plz
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At 06:53 pm kmk5487 Said :
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I hate when its morning
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At 02:11 am seekerovtruth Said :
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Line 5 has been posted and the winning submission goes to- vicki721. Applause Applause :) The poem now reads as follows. It was a dark and dreary Sunday morning, As I woke up and felt the emptiness, Fearing sadness would come without warning, As time seems to capture my beauty with such cruelness, The bright days mock me while the world continues turning. (Can you think of a good next line? Perhaps something to rhyme with cruelness and emptiness as it seems to be taking on an ABABAB format so far) We'll see. Have fun and do join in. Thanks! June P.S. Thanks to all for their submissions. It was a hard decision to make. Loved them. :) Keep em coming. Peace
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At 03:29 pm ttPUMAtt Said :
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i can't hear you over the sound of my ultimate relaxaion and sass
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At 03:10 pm 500nets Said :
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are you still talking?
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At 02:52 pm ttPUMAtt Said :
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hey guys check out my carefree attitude towards life and learning with my way laid-back style of typing. do you see how extra-relaxed i'm portraying myself? i barely have enough care in my to hit the space bar, it's so cool, lol
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In response to 500nets At 02:49 pm ttPUMAtt Said :
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Yep, my perfect is teef as well. How'd you know that?
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In response to ttPUMAtt At 02:48 pm 500nets Said :
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teef? lol
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In response to ttPUMAtt At 02:48 pm 500nets Said :
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and vice versa
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In response to seekerovtruth At 02:47 pm 500nets Said :
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oh ha ha, i thought you were already adding that one i submitted to your poem, funny
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In response to 500nets At 02:47 pm ttPUMAtt Said :
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My teef is perfect.
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In response to 500nets At 02:47 pm ttPUMAtt Said :
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Once again, it didn't (by the way... you say you enjoy messing with me. Perhaps this is a shared feeling? OMFG NO WAI). And you're right... if there are people like you who exist, that means there must have been people like me to help your kind along, being too enamored with how super-de-uper everything is, instead of paying attention to the differences. So yeah, your gratefulness is not only appreciated, but required.
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In response to 500nets At 02:46 pm seekerovtruth Said :
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I was referring to your line - Some people find intense gratification with tapping their arm, tying it up, and inserting into their bloodstream negativity laced with pessimism. THAT'S A GREAT LINE but it was not submitted there so I will only use what is posted there. But that really IS a great line. :) I don't care who you are. That's funny.
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At 02:45 pm 500nets Said :
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now get a toothache
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At 02:44 pm 500nets Said :
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WOW, my light hearted banter really did get to you, sorry. Its my opinion that you can either love life, learn to, or its pointless, but i guess there has to be people like you, if there are to be people like me, so therfore i am gratefull to have your end of the spectrum
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