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Created: 01/20 01:20 pm

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Alright, what the heck is with all of the poems on this site?

Ok, I for one am getting amazingly sick of the poems on this site. They're starting to piss me off pretty badly. They're all whiny and anxty. I mean I unsterstand teen anxt is very difficult and you need to vent sometimes, but for the love of God, stop crying! Every poem on this site is the same, "oh, my life is hell, this sucks, I'm a prisoner with no free creativity" GET OVER IT. You may say, "oh I'm depressed", shut up! What did the generations before you do? They didn't whine all day bout how they're a "prisoner" and they're life "sucks" just because they get pushed around at school. or they're parents tell them what to do. You should get a good whoopin' and then talk about how much you're life "sucks". You're parents work incredibly hard to make your life good, and thank God that your family makes enough money to put bread on the table. You should talk to some older folks about how it was in their day. They didn't go off, lock themselves in their rooms, and cry and whine all day and night until they got what they wanted. If you're American like me, you live in the wealthiest country in the world! You should be so lucky you have a roof over your head and that you even get to use a computer. Why do you waste away your life crying and pouting for no reason, when you should be giving thanks for whatever you have.


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In response to RalRasper At 02:48 am MasterOPuppets Said :
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Will do.
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At 02:47 am RalRasper Said :
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but some is right from the heart
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At 02:46 am RalRasper Said :
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some of my stuff is just randomness and really ment to be a joke
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At 02:45 am dudeitzLIZZY Said :
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i agree
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In response to Autumnr1 At 02:45 am RalRasper Said :
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thank you i appreciate that, it was the first poem i wrote on here, and it was really how i felt, and i guess how i feel now still
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In response to RalRasper At 02:40 am Autumnr1 Said :
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i really liked your poem longing for love it was beautiful
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At 02:38 am RalRasper Said :
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paste them and i will
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At 02:36 am Ssaasssssyyyyy Said :
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Oh yeah read mine too!
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At 02:34 am RalRasper Said :
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i gave u points too
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At 02:31 am Autumnr1 Said :
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no not yet i will
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In response to Autumnr1 At 02:29 am RalRasper Said :
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i read ur poems and i really liked them, did u read mine?
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At 02:27 am Autumnr1 Said :
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Active Night Dark deep water flows through the creek Raccoons devour crayfish while i sleep while the wind blows, i can hear the rustle of the leaves the crickets chirp continuously deer wander through the fields always on the same path owls hoot as mice scurry through the grass opossums noisily dig through the trash by Autumnr1
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At 02:24 am Autumnr1 Said :
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http://www.testriffic.com/poem/Autumnr1/128786 http://www.testriffic.com/poem/Autumnr1/131006
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At 02:19 am RalRasper Said :
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http://www.testriffic.com/poem/RalRasper/119804
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At 02:18 am MeanMarlboroMa Said :
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yeah most poetry sucks lots and lots of flaccid cock. so do the people.
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