yeah I would say yours are more like lyrics. Annecdotes, or short snippets of pop culture. Andy Wharol made a fine career as an artest doing such. I am not sure it should be called poetry though. I think its fine really. I just wasn't moved by it really. It might have just been first glance but I didn't get any feeling of who you were or who I am from reading it....isn't that what poetry is about? conveying SOMETHING?
They are basically lyrics, yes. And I will admit that they aren't very good lyrics. But hey, lyrics don't really have to be good. Well.... I'm not sure what you said towards the end of that... But, thanks.
Your's are some of the worst crap, honestly....... And you insulting mine wouldn't hurt. I know they suck. I'm not a writer, nor do I intend to be one.