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At 09:41 pm numbbbb0z Said :
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Atfirst glance upon my naked wings. Clipped and buried in a desolate waste. My second coming in. My second coming into the night proves marvelous, mysterious, wondrous. All known information, history, galaxies and Earthwaves I no cherish to hold. Being true. Lovely. A higher resting...Honestly. He whispers into my mouth, "Slowly await for yours" and duskfully dissolves into the stars. I gaze my head upwards and acknowledge the crescent snowflight moon smiling. Baring it's teeth, "Hello" I say and my breath steams into the sky.."There!" I scream!..
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At 06:43 pm cain182 Said :
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accept.cry.beg.die. you cross on over to the other side, hoplessly try to find a cure, you try too hard, its all obscure. Moments i have lived, they all fade away..a worse time or pain? theres not much to say.. A life stripped of honor, glory and care..a search for elysia, I caress death and lay my soul bare.
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At 06:39 pm october1015 Said :
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Dark eternal bliss settles in as I stare in your eyes. I feel your heart beating against mine, in an attempt to proffess your love. Your hands are in my hair, softly carressing my face, and I smile.
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At 06:28 pm numbbbb0z Said :
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Carried on over to the other side, carriage caravan carried another life. Acceptance of hopelessness, let me tell your laying corpse a story of hopelessness. For I too will die without a soul to hear, my cries ignored. Stepped on, unacknowledged, unaddressed and naked. As you have without me. I beg in apologies, I beg in apologies. What have you honestly lost? A worse time and pain, mistreated, abused, crying, lieing, sears of wicked pain soiling the drought of rivers. My babe..Tell me of how you are. Enter my soul I beg of you!
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At 06:23 pm numbbbb0z Said :
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LLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVEEEEEEEEEEE.
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At 06:12 pm cain182 Said :
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explanation of murder, explanation of hate...guilt, love, passion and faith. emotion seep through her broken soul...not a word spoken, not a word told. the shining moon drenched in her blood, a sheen of red, emotions unplugged. Where was he when she fought to breathe, those faint whispers calling out to greet, him. to her heart that never was his, she died a painful death in bliss.
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At 02:27 am numbbbb0z Said :
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Bringing forth the care once seen, where's the while in noway. Resident mockery abandon this house we've managed to destroy, burning every photograph, memory, picture and perfected frame. Losing myself amongst the soiled ember and flaming Earth; ripping her, dragging her with shoulders attached to a ton of brick skulls murdered with hate, repression, and selfish gain. Did you know chasing a burrow underneathe a rock overpowers the shining moon we've once gazed upon? The silent night echoes..Echoes for something of us to explain..What could that explanation be?
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At 02:24 am numbbbb0z Said :
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Hurting the love once was before, the lonely road seemingly weak against merciful footsteps. Uncharted territory, explore, profound, discuss. Side by sides imagined oh destiny mind filled and destined to dwell. WE live and we die and death not an instant, thoughts spared, ravished, plundered and buried to renew once more. Seemingly similar faces and smiles return.
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At 01:12 am madmarcus Said :
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Look up above, the mistletoe. Look up, the time where does it go. between your kiss and the end. somewhere along our timeline I lost a friend. We try to pretend that all is fine when our eyes meat. I see the twitch I see the pain, I see the remembered joy. I look away and walk away. its the most humane thing that I can do.
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At 12:55 am madmarcus Said :
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Oh silver bells, Silver bells. leading me down the halls of hell. Joy, strife joy strife. leading me down the path of life. born in the womb healthy striving and contagious. We play the part of puppets as we dance the dance of the fool. Soul in, blood out. Spout! YELL YELL REBEL! Fight the flesh and epidermcracy! Devour all that is and everwas like milk n' cookies on christmas eve. a fat jolley man!
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