wow i read some of your work. i think your really good. you should take some courses if you want to bring more format to your writing. but i think your really good as is.
I'm not one to be cirtiqueing on petry, but what I do know is this, add as many techniques in your poems as possible such as assonacne, simile, metaphor, symbolism, onamatopiea and many more, the more you 'successfully add the more detailed and affective your poems shall become.