zDashti

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In memory of my beloved brother

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Created on 1-5-08

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.Do you look down at me at night ...

.Do you see my candel burning so big and so bright ...

.The candel I burn that reminds me of you ...

.The candel I hope that you would burn too ...

.Not a day goes by without me thinking of you ...

.Hopping that you'd come back so that days won't be blue ...

.I feel no one under stands me apart from you ...

.I go to your grave expecting a response ...

.To the pointless questions I can't get across ...

.though sometimes in my mind I forget that you'r dead ...

.BUT I'll make sure you keep on living in my head ...

.I love you so much it makes me mad ...

.That i can't hear you say it back - the one thing that would make me glad ...

.You probebly think I'm silly when we didn't even know each other ...

.But to me you'll always be my loving BROTHER

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On February 29th 2008 digitaldiva425 Said :

	Very touching..

On January 7th 2008 tece26 Said :

	Wow... that is very touching very well done.

On January 5th 2008 dhmm Said :

	awwwwwwwww that is to sad but i know how u fell i lost someone close to me to

On January 5th 2008 unknownwolfie Said :

	awww thts sad! :( ... may he rest in peace .. sorry to hear abt him ... but the poem is amazin i love it