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Created on 3-12-08
its not completely done yet. but once it is, il update it.
he lets out a sigh, not loud enough to hear
this is a scream, but why would you care
your not him, you don't know his life
hes just a kid, a kid with a knife
it stabs through his heart like a needle and thread
he needs a place to rest, to clear his head
he calls up his friend, its to late he bailed
he needs a new life, cuz this one he failed
he leaves it behind, he wants to start new
he freaks out and screams, his last nerve just blew
he circles his mind these thoughts in his brain
finger on the trigger he can end all his pain
Please Login to post comments| On August 12th 2008 audica Said : | |
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ok, this is my second fave of yours. awesome job! i can't wait to see the finished peice thingy. keep writing! |
| On March 12th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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wow this is like my friend's life=( good job!! |
| On March 12th 2008 shadyishott Said : | |
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i luv this can u read my poems "this cut"&"wat she feels" plzzz & thxxxx 8]> |
| On March 12th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said : | |
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Written perfectly...has awesome rhyme...plus being deep. lol. Love it |
| On March 12th 2008 momsrule Said : | |
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i love it matty.
it's so deep. |
