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Dancing With You

Views (129) Passion Created on 11-17-07 Flag
Dancing with you
Underneath a velvet sky
No longer wondering
Or asking the question why.

I find myself in heaven
A place I have not been
Since I was
At the age of seven.

I hold you in my arms
As the music carries on
Hoping and praying
There is no end to this song.

Dancing with you
To me it is like
A prayer coming true
For me to no longer be blue.

I don't want to miss a thing
When I'm holding you in my arms
I can hear the angels in heaven sing
As to the music we sway and swing.

So, let me hold you now
Let this be a moment that lasts forever
With our bodies so close together
I feel much lighter than a feather.

I find myself crushing on you
I know that you feel that too
When I saw you across the room
I threw away the rest of my gloom.

Dancing with you
As though no one else is near
You somehow managed
To chase away all fear.
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On January 16th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said :
TheDragonwitch Really beautifull and touching.
On January 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 awww
On December 22nd 2007 smilemile12 Said :
smilemile12 good one
On December 5th 2007 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord this is somthing that i would say about my Mrs. beautifully done!!!
On December 3rd 2007 countryfreak13 Said :
countryfreak13 I thnk this is pretty cool! Keep it up!
On November 30th 2007 punkgurl989 Said :
my picture
aawww i love the way it makes you feel i love it !!!
On November 24th 2007 kellyjob Said :
kellyjob Nice! Thats true love
On November 19th 2007 ha7 Said :
ha7 This was really good.
On November 19th 2007 luvhim4ever12 Said :
luvhim4ever12 wow very good job
On November 18th 2007 breepers Said :
breepers it was good.i liked it
On November 18th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Pretty sweet.
On November 18th 2007 sowmiya Said :
sowmiya nice rhyming! i write poems too. check mine out ;)