Created By
Author's Comments
Do you like this?Rate this Poem
My Poems
+4
|
+
19
|
Breathless Moments |
|
+
16
|
Dancing With You |
|
+
24
|
I Give...My All |
|
+
5
|
Am I The One You See |
Dancing With You
Dancing with you
Underneath a velvet sky
No longer wondering
Or asking the question why.
I find myself in heaven
A place I have not been
Since I was
At the age of seven.
I hold you in my arms
As the music carries on
Hoping and praying
There is no end to this song.
Dancing with you
To me it is like
A prayer coming true
For me to no longer be blue.
I don't want to miss a thing
When I'm holding you in my arms
I can hear the angels in heaven sing
As to the music we sway and swing.
So, let me hold you now
Let this be a moment that lasts forever
With our bodies so close together
I feel much lighter than a feather.
I find myself crushing on you
I know that you feel that too
When I saw you across the room
I threw away the rest of my gloom.
Dancing with you
As though no one else is near
You somehow managed
To chase away all fear.
Underneath a velvet sky
No longer wondering
Or asking the question why.
I find myself in heaven
A place I have not been
Since I was
At the age of seven.
I hold you in my arms
As the music carries on
Hoping and praying
There is no end to this song.
Dancing with you
To me it is like
A prayer coming true
For me to no longer be blue.
I don't want to miss a thing
When I'm holding you in my arms
I can hear the angels in heaven sing
As to the music we sway and swing.
So, let me hold you now
Let this be a moment that lasts forever
With our bodies so close together
I feel much lighter than a feather.
I find myself crushing on you
I know that you feel that too
When I saw you across the room
I threw away the rest of my gloom.
Dancing with you
As though no one else is near
You somehow managed
To chase away all fear.
| On January 16th 2008 TheDragonwitch Said : | |
|
|
Really beautifull and touching. |
| On January 2nd 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
|
|
awww |
| On December 22nd 2007 smilemile12 Said : | |
|
|
good one |
| On December 5th 2007 mydragonlord Said : | |
|
|
this is somthing that i would say about my Mrs. beautifully done!!! |
| On December 3rd 2007 countryfreak13 Said : | |
|
|
I thnk this is pretty cool! Keep it up! |
| On November 30th 2007 punkgurl989 Said : | |
|
|
aawww i love the way it makes you feel i love it !!! |
| On November 24th 2007 kellyjob Said : | |
|
|
Nice! Thats true love |
| On November 19th 2007 ha7 Said : | |
|
|
This was really good. |
| On November 19th 2007 luvhim4ever12 Said : | |
|
|
wow very good job |
| On November 18th 2007 breepers Said : | |
|
|
it was good.i liked it |
| On November 18th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
|
|
Pretty sweet. |
| On November 18th 2007 sowmiya Said : | |
|
|
nice rhyming! i write poems too. check mine out ;) |


