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Life IS |
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Neckties |
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pale |
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The Life Melody |
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I Miss You So |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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Breakin Through (Song Lyrics) |
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It was love at first sight |
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LOST LOVE |
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Listless Feeling of Soul Touching Hands |
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My Lover's Touch |
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WHEN YOUR NEAR |
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Created on 12-31-69
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Please Login to post comments| On October 19th 2007 sukihoshiko27 Said : | |
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SOUNDS A BIT LIKE AN EDGAR ALLAN POE KNOCK-OFF. WITH THE FOREVER MORE. SHOULDA BEEN A LITTLE MORE DESCRIPTIVE. I LIKED IT THOGUH. |
| On October 19th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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I like the emotion. Just one thing...I think you should choose just one rhyming scheme and stick to that rather than chop and change throughout. It tends to flow better that way. |
