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Wrote this for those who can't let it goRate this Poem
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Standing tall with with your head held high,
Trying to smile while life passes by,
In the sweet dreams of a perfect life,
Crying evertime you try to fight,
Unseen perfection is still there,
Staring back without a care,
Grab fast and hold it tight,
And feel the warmth of that kiss goodnight,
That smile that laugh that makes your day,
Feel as those thoughts fade away,
That horrible feeling of good times lost,
And a constant reminder of a worthy cost.
| On June 14th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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i wish i could give u 2 thumbs up |
| On June 14th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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omg thats so sad |
| On June 14th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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wow..i like this one alot too :) |
| On June 1st 2007 jasoneli Said : | |
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kinda sad, but makes you think. i like it |
| On May 30th 2007 Glork21 Said : | |
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cool poem. |


