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Created:
02/14 2007
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Category:
Pain
My Poems
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alone |
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indescribable |
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numb |
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Advice?....Love |
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Everytime |
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latin love poem! |
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A gift for you, breaker of hearts |
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she loves me she loves me not |
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love? |
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so much |
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Something real |
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destroyed from within |
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the moments in between |
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if you'd like to know |
alone
as I lie awake, alone in the dark
my mind begins to wonder
to things I’d hoped to forget
cuts reopen, pain resurfaces
with each tear my hope fades
until nothing remains but a knife
one smooth motion and it all could be over
I take the last step forward
collapsing inward, reliving my pain
my close for the last time
heartbeats grow scarce
their she waits
smile turned to frown
eyes full of the tears
I promised to prevent
she whispers why
and falls to her knees
exhaling the last of my life
I’m left on floor
cold and alone
the way I’ve been
since the day you said goodbye
Please Login to post comments| On November 9th 2007 666emokid Said: |
| omfg i absolutly love it thats exactly how i feel right now |
| On August 25th 2007 YoungPoet213 Said: |
| Wow, very deep... I love it. |
| On August 24th 2007 maryannsnyder Said: |
| ive been there, i can almost say literally |
| On June 17th 2007 NaomiElizabeth Said: |
| way to get your feelings out kudos to you |
| On June 3rd 2007 Ashley81293 Said: |
| Wow. This is really sad. I almost started crying. But it is good, you have a natural talent! |
| On May 30th 2007 ccarrieanne Said: |
| thats deep |
| On April 23rd 2007 darkenigma Said: |
| wow thats really good |
| On April 5th 2007 chrissey08h2 Said: |
| wow this is the best alone poem i have ever read |
| On April 4th 2007 phhs2010marie Said: |
| uhmmm made Lindsay cry.....I'm sry bout this person....I have sum words to say to her...grrrrr |
| On February 26th 2007 Slyclever Said: |
| you need to tell me about this girl that broke your heart or whatever that made you feel that way! love you lots!
Angela |
| On February 25th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said: |
| aw, that's sad... |
| On February 15th 2007 Chandapanda08 Said: |
| wow i totally feel ur pain.. |
