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angel of darkness |
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my suicide |
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nowhere to go |
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it's happening again |
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a final goodbye |
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over you |
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suicide |
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one more year |
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living a lie |
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what would they do? |
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invisible walls |
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no way out |
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i must hold on |
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all alone |
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unseen feelings |
unseen feelings
It’s like I’m invisible to you
You look at me but have no clue
You sit and stare into my eyes
But you will never realize
All my pain and all my fears
Broken hearts and fallen tears
You like to think that I’m alright
Cause the pain only seems to show at night
Whenever people come around
My frown turns itself upside down
No one knows what’s wrong with me
I don’t understand what’s so hard to see
But they don’t know what’s written on my heart
Or why my world is falling apart
They don’t realize the pain I feel everyday
Or how badly I wish it would just go away
If somebody knew what went on inside
Maybe my heart would feel more alive
| On November 25th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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been down that road before...i love how you can express yourself so easily through your writing. great job hun! |
| On June 7th 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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ppl can be so blind when it comes to something like this. i have felt the same feeling many of times as im sure others have too. anyways awesome poem! very good |
| On June 6th 2007 Bladecjc Said : | |
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good job. |
| On June 5th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I really love this poem~there is so much truth in this. Everyone has things bottled up inside and deserve to have someone to share them with |


