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angel of darkness |
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my suicide |
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living a lie
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Created on 5-18-07
the story of a girl who ended her life
with the help of some pills and a really sharp knife
it was her last resort, she had nothing left to do
because she wouldn't let her feelings shine all the way through
each day she would wake and put on a fake smile
so no one would know she was hurting inside
even her friends thought she was fine
when all along she was living a lie
what made her that way will remain a mystery
and now no one will no, no one will see
why an innocent child, living a lie
hated her life and wanted to die
Please Login to post comments| On November 25th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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oh..wow...i truely love it. amazing indeed. terrific job hun! |
| On June 2nd 2007 fgggfx Said : | |
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OMG. i absolutly luv this.Great job! |
| On May 30th 2007 Glork21 Said : | |
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wow is the right word. very well written. |
| On May 21st 2007 LillithRain Said : | |
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that was great, you are so talented |
| On May 19th 2007 Stormece Said : | |
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All I can say, is WOW. This is good. It illustrates how we really cannot seem to see what people are truly feeling on the inside sometimes. Many people wear a mask on the outside to hide thoughts on the inside. You showed this concept very well in your poem. Again, WOW. |
