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Created on 11-23-07
tear stained face, blood shot eyes
thoughts of death cross my mid
imperfection, big mistake
one more day, it's far too late
full of shame, no more hope
put the noose around my throat
haunting pain, all alone
fading smile, can't go home
bloody hands, icy skin
letting go, I'll never win
suffocating, can't hold on
final breath, forever gone
Please Login to post comments| On February 17th 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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Wow, this is good, well done! |
| On December 11th 2007 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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Blunt and powerful. It said something. Nice writing! |
| On December 9th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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this is really well written..the flow is really smooth and i like it alot :) |
| On December 9th 2007 MoOnZoMbIe Said : | |
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Powerful. Amazing. I love the choppiness, it gives the meaning an edge. |
| On November 27th 2007 KaytlynnMM Said : | |
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WOW |
| On November 25th 2007 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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wow, i thought i was good, damn, im like trash compared to you |
| On November 25th 2007 EmoKid928 Said : | |
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one of my faves
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| On November 24th 2007 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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wow...this is probably one of my new favorites |
| On November 24th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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wow! very amazing hun! terrific job! |
| On November 23rd 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Love it! I think it's my favorite by you! Awesome word choice, formatting and flow! |
| On November 23rd 2007 1234fukdaw0r1d Said : | |
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Wow that is beautifully dark.. I like it a lot...would you comment and rate my stuff please... I'd be an honor |
| On November 23rd 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Powerful stuff. Really well written. Good job! |
