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angel of darkness |
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my suicide |
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nowhere to go |
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it's happening again |
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a final goodbye |
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over you |
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suicide |
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one more year |
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living a lie |
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what would they do? |
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invisible walls |
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no way out |
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i must hold on |
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all alone |
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unseen feelings |
never let go
i love you so much
more than you will ever know
ill never let you go
| On February 17th 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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Awwh, indeed, I agree, short and sweet! |
| On February 16th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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oops last line has too many syllables. It's very cute, just giving honest feedback. :) |
| On December 16th 2007 rain2teardrops Said : | |
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thats sweet |
| On December 11th 2007 AlexINTJ Said : | |
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Nice |
| On December 9th 2007 California1516 Said : | |
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haikus, even tho they are short, can express alot of meaning in a couple lines :D nice work:) |
| On November 27th 2007 crazynikki8503 Said : | |
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who are you?....DO I KNOW YOU? |
| On November 27th 2007 KaytlynnMM Said : | |
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cute |
| On November 27th 2007 KaytlynnMM Said : | |
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cute |
| On November 25th 2007 MelissaDA Said : | |
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aww...short and sweet. |
| On November 25th 2007 evildarkness13 Said : | |
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short, but great, love it |
| On November 24th 2007 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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aw..cute : ) |
| On November 23rd 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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Short and sweet. |


